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Battle for Henderson Field[edit]

Respectfully request a peer review on this article that I've been working on for some time. I appreciate anyone's comments and/or suggestions. Cla68 12:28, 3 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Kirill Lokshin[edit]

Excellent article, as usual. A few specific points:

  • Are there any useful statistics on the numbers of wounded?
  • I'd suggest using blockquote formatting instead of {{cquote}}.
  • The page ranges in the footnotes should use en-dashes instead of hyphens. (Horribly nitpicky, I know.)

Overall, though, this is basically ready for FAC, I think. Kirill 16:12, 3 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the helpful comments you provide in spite of your busy schedule, as always. Cla68 23:18, 3 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
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