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Battle of Dak To[edit]

Have made extensive modifications to this article and am looking for constructive criticism. RM Gillespie 20:53, 3 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Kirill Lokshin[edit]

Another excellent article. A few minor points that need some attention:

  • The lead ought to be expanded to two/three full paragraphs; as it stands, it doesn't really summarize the article.
  • The map of the II Corps Tactical Zone should probably be pushed a few paragraphs down, so as to avoid squeezing text between it and the infobox.
  • There's probably little need for an explicit "more details" link for Giap; it's not really a sub-article, and the link is present in the text.
  • The extended quotes in blockquote formatting don't need quotation marks.

Overall, though, this is fully up to your usual standards. Kirill 21:25, 3 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]