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Heinrich Hoffmann (pilot)[edit]

This is a very short article and includes every bit of information I could find so far on the guy. Please let me know how to improve the article and/or alternative sources to consult. MisterBee1966 (talk) 17:31, 29 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Auntieruth[edit]

Interesting article, but scarce on the details, as you've pointed out above. I'm not sure where else to look. I suppose you've tried the 1940s era newspapers? I meddled with your lead a bit, because the last two sentences of it were repetitive. In the lead you make a big deal about his receiving the award posthumously, but don't mention that in the article itself. Auntieruth55 (talk) 17:49, 21 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

TomStar81[edit]

As a practical matter the article looks good enough to be B-class or even A-class. I think you've done an outstanding job with what you were given to work with. TomStar81 (Talk) 10:22, 26 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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