Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/John Emilius Fauquier

John_Emilius_Fauquier[edit]

I rescued this article from deletion (with considerable help from a few other users who are listed in the article history). I also feel that this article represents and interesting look at the RAF and the RCAF in WWII (See the talk page for discrepancies in other articles and sources I found while researching this article). I feel this article could be considerably improved by peer review, most notably by suggestions with regard to cleaning up references, offering new sources, and so forth. Protonk (talk) 20:08, 27 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Ryan4314[edit]

Lead could do with expanding, might wanna drop the "exceptional", it's kind of an opinion. Ryan4314 (talk) 19:09, 10 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]