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Max-Hellmuth Ostermann[edit]

I'm seeking feedback and re-assessment (Start now) on this article I just worked on. I have ordered another book on the man and hope to find some more background on his personnel life. Please let me know how to improve the article. Thanks MisterBee1966 (talk) 08:23, 21 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

AustralianRupert[edit]

I have assessed as a B class article as I believe that it meets the criteria. Well done, by the way. I fixed a typo and a consistency issue with terminology. The only other point I have is about the use of emdashes in the Early life and career section. Per WP:DASH emdashes should be unspaced. Anyway, apologies for the short review. If I get time I will try to come back and give it a bit more time. Cheers. — AustralianRupert (talk) 15:18, 25 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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