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Military of East Timor[edit]

I have been working on this article on and off for some months and think that it now provides a very comprehensive overview of East Timor's troubled military. The East Timorese seem to think so as well as part of the history section has been lifted from Wikipedia and posted on the East Timor Ministry of Defence and Security's website as the military's official history! I would be very interested in other editors' views on the article and suggestions for how it can be improved to FA standard. If anyone can point me towards more photos of the military that would also be much appreciated as the article is very bland at present (though the order of battle image which was created by Noclador is brilliant). --Nick Dowling (talk) 07:10, 20 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Kirill Lokshin[edit]

Quite good, overall. A few stylistic suggestions:

  • Is listing the budget as "Unknown" in the infobox useful? I would have left out that field entirely, if there's no data for it.
  • The diagram might be a bit neater floated at the side; on a wide monitor, the whitespace is a bit excessive.
  • Personally, I find {{details}} to be better worded than {{main}}.

Keep up the great work! Kirill 03:42, 23 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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