Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/USS Missouri (BB-63)

USS Missouri (BB-63)[edit]

By accidentall oversight its been more than two years since this article has seen any type of community attention, so I am submitting this article for Peer Review ahead of a needed FAR to address any issues that may need to be fixed. TomStar81 (Talk) 22:39, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Patar knight[edit]

Alright, pretty good article. Couple of minor suggestions:

In the introduction, US Navy and United States Navy are redundant. The first could be removed, and the second linked.

In the "Service with the 3rd Fleet, Admiral Halsey" section, 2nd paragraph, the first link to Honshu is in a better position to be linked then the second one.

In "Signing of the Japanese Instrument of Surrender", the first link to Honshu could be linked.

Redirect Navy Day in the Post-war section to the correct sub-section.

In the same section, "both nations' independence.[4]" doesn't seem to refer to two nations at all. I'm guessing that it's referring to Greece and Turkey?

In the Korean section the "Republic of Korea." is not previously mentioned, and could lead to confusion among readers

"In an effort to dissuade U.N. forces from completely overrunning North Korea the People's Republic of China", comma after Korea.

Same section, Link to Mark Wayne Clark ("sailed thence to Sasebo, Japan. General Mark W. Clark,")

Good job on this article, and good luck on the FAR. --Patar knight - ^chat/_{contributions} 00:09, 29 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]