Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Walter Ohmsen

Walter Ohmsen[edit]

I came across Walter Ohmsen biography this summer while visiting the beaches of Normandy. The article more or less sums up my research on Ohmsen. Please let me know what you think. Thanks MisterBee1966 (talk) 12:06, 10 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

AustralianRupert[edit]

Good work so far, just a few minor technical comments from me:

according to the Featured article tools there are three disambig links that should be fixed: [1];

done

alt text could be added to the images per WP:ALT;

done

is there a publication date for the Tanne source?

no, I bought the book at the Crisbecq battery museum. It has neither date nor ISBN number.

is there an ISBN or an OCLC number for the Tanne source? (you can find OCLC numbers by going to: [2]);
citations/refs could be added to the information in the notes;
are there citations/refs that could be added for each of the awards?

done

Citation # 10 to Der Spiegel should have an accessdate if it is a web citation.

done

AustralianRupert (talk) 01:43, 11 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the comments MisterBee1966 (talk) 05:07, 11 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]