Wikipedia:WikiProject Tropical cyclones/Assessment/Cyclone Leon–Eline

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Promoted to A-Class: LightandDark2000 🌀 (talk) 06:44, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Cyclone Leon–Eline[edit]

Nominator(s): ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:12, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not sure if the article is in decent shape for FAC, or if I should focus on the sub-articles for Madagascar and Mozambique floods. If the latter is needed, then I'll archive this ACR. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:12, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

~~Hurricanehink, I think you should go for the sub-articles. I'm also closing this ACR by myself. SMB9 9thx my edits! 06:11, 10 December 2020 (UTC)~~[reply]

@Hurricanehink and SMB99thx: where are your "more than one reviewer" per WP:ACLASS? – Finnusertop (talk ⋅ contribs) 22:12, 10 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Pinging @MarioJump83 – Finnusertop (talk ⋅ contribs) 22:20, 10 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. Mario Jump 83! 00:36, 11 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Support from MarioJump83

I'll formally reviewing this. Based on my quick review, I got this:

Is there anything more about the floods from October to February 2000 that can be added to 2000 Mozambique flood which would be renamed to 1999–2000 Mozambique floods?
Early 2000 Madagascar floods talks more about Tropical Storm Gloria.

These articles are not WP:CFORK and I do not believe merging these articles into Cyclone Leon–Eline is appropriate. Overall, I do believe that this article is more than enough to make Leon–Eline FAC based on the size of 2018 Global FT Pacific hurricane articles and add 2000 Mozambique flood & Early 2000 Madagascar floods into 1999–2000 SWIO GT. Mario Jump 83! 01:01, 11 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@LightandDark2000: I would like you to close this ACR, per WP:ACLASS. Mario Jump 83! 10:37, 27 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Support from LightandDark2000

Reading through the article, I only found a few issues that needed to be addressed:

The usage of "Category" as a noun. "Category" is not a noun, but it was used as such in several instances. I went through the article and wrote out the storm's full status in each of those cases.
Eline had re-attained tropical cyclone at 12:00 UTC There was an grammatical error here in which the storm's status was not properly written out when the sentence was referring to it. I fixed that as well.
stating they flood refugees from Mozambique would be deported if they entered illegally. There was a grammatical error here in which "they" was incorrectly used instead of "that". I also fixed this as well.

The article is very comprehensive and very well-written. As such, after making the necessary corrections, I feel that this article meets the A-Class requirements, and as such, I agree with MarioJump83's decision to promote this article to A-Class. As such, I am passing this A-Class review. Congratulations! LightandDark2000 🌀 (talk) 06:40, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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