Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Anna Lee Fisher/archive1

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lead: one of the astronauts supported vehicle integrated testing and payload testing>who supported/supporting

Early life: published three article in the Inorganic Chemistry.>published three articles in Inorganic Chemistry.

Selection: Bill, who was now her fiancée>fiancé

she had the best chance>she had the better chance

"It didn't matter what the pay was,">"It didn't matter what the pay was",

Training on a mock-up of a modular section of the Hubble Space Telescope. >Training on a mock-up of a modular section of the Hubble Space Telescope

Removed full stop

mission specialists astronaut candidates>mission specialist astronaut candidates

the five MDs>clarify with wikilink

in that capacity>. In that capacity

STS-51-A: perform Capsule communicator (CAPCOM) duties>perform capsule communicator (CAPCOM) duties

The crew went to Seattle, Washington,>The crew went to Seattle, Washington,