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Addressed comments from Crisco 1492[edit]

Prose comments
  • FBI agents Mulder and Scully - Perhaps full names and actors on first use?
    Done. GRAPPLE X 00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • They travel to Idaho -- Mulder and Scully, to avoid the possibility of DT coming with them.
    Got it. GRAPPLE X 00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "they have been here for a long, long time" - Emphasis in original?
    Arguably yes but I've removed it for tone anyway. GRAPPLE X 00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "of course" - Is this really needed?
    Guess not. Gone. GRAPPLE X 00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Associate Director or Deputy Director? Link goes to DD
    The position has since been renamed from Felt's time; he was Associate Director but the modern position is Deputy Director. I could use the redirect Associate Director of the Federal Bureau of Investigation to lessen confusion if you feel it's a good idea. GRAPPLE X 00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Unnecessary.
  • Aurora Project - Link to Aurora (aircraft)?
    This came up in the GA review; the source doesn't actually identify a specific project beyond "Aurora project" and it was felt at that time to avoid assuming it was that particular aircraft. I assume it is that one, though; I could be persuaded to agree to a link. GRAPPLE X 00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Well, as Aurora Project has only one US-related topic, and the aircraft resembles the one in the plot... — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:15, 21 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    You make a solid case. Added. GRAPPLE X 01:46, 21 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    • Not much from me. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:38, 21 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
      • Thanks for your time reviewing this. I've addressed or replied to your concerns. GRAPPLE X 00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Addressed comments and source review from TBrandley[edit]

Source review - spotchecks not done

  • Fox Home Entertainment should be 20th Century Fox Home Entertainment
    Had it piped; removed the piping to display fully
  • "Time, Incf". Typo after inc
    Artefact from ctrl+Fing earlier, oops.
  • Actually, Time, Inc shouldn't have that comma
    Fixed both instances to "Time Inc."
  • Ref. 22, 24 are missing its publishers
    Got them.
  • Ref. 29 should be single quotes ('), not double quotes (")
    Fixed; missed earlier as I forgot to look for double quotes ending, not just beginning a title. GRAPPLE X 02:21, 21 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

TBrandley 02:09, 21 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Other comments

  • Other comments would be very minor, so I just did them myself. Cheers, TBrandley 02:12, 21 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Thanks for the review! Fixed up your listed points. GRAPPLE X 02:21, 21 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    No problem. Awesome work! TBrandley 02:23, 21 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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