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Addressed comments from Erick[edit]

Comments:

  • Change the title of FN 20 to "Dreaming of You — Selena: Awards".
  • Change the title of FN 21 to "Rhythmic Top 40 1995-07-01" and include the date of the chart in the date parameter. Also, you can just use Billboard instead of Billboard.com since it's still Billboard. If that's not possible, then use Billboard.biz instead. Erick (talk) 17:22, 21 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Addressed comments from TBrandley[edit]

Comments

  • Any images?
  • Why is "song" linked in the infobox and not in the article's prose? Be consistent. I'd personally say that "song" is WP:OVERLINK.
  • That's the way the infobox has it, there's no way on unlinking it. Jonatalk to me 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Sun Valley, Los Angeles" should be two separate links, if possible
  • "A.B. Quintanilla III—her brother—and principal record producer" the end of that makes me think you are going to say a new person, so perhaps say "A.B. Quintanilla III—her brother, who is also the song's principal record producer", or something like that
  • You say "cross over", the link says "crossover", which?
  • Can you say the release year for Anthology, as done with Entre a Mi Mundo above in the article
  • Link Selena in Background and development, as it is its first mention after lead, see WP:REPEATLINK
  • Same goes for all other words like the very above issue, such as EMI Latin, etc.
  • Can you explain who "EMI Latin" is for a first time in background and development?
  • "chose" that's a typo, it is "choose"
  • "Selena's emotive enunciation was highly praised by contemporary music critics" shouldn't this be in reception, not composition
  • Not really because her vocals are part of the songs composition. Jonatalk to me 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • ""Missing My Baby" received a positive response from music critics" should be ""Missing My Baby" received positive reviews from music critics"
  • I don't think you need "music critics" in the article anywhere, just "critics", as music there is repetitive and redundant, as well as unnecessary
  • Can "VH1" be quickly be explained in critical reception and legacy?
  • Like "Music channel, VH1..."? Wouldn't that "music" be too repetitive? Jonatalk to me 21:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "ex-friend" doesn't sound right for Wikipedia, perhaps "ex-partner", or something like that
  • "Billboard reported it" reported what? The song?
  • Table doesn't meet WP:ACCESS, add scope cols and rows to ensure it does
  • Table doesn't meet WP:DTT, add a table caption to ensure it does
  • Don't use doubled quotes (") in reference titles, use single quotes ('), in reference titles or in quotes explaining where it is in the reference, example, ""Clack, Cary: "A single of hers that is played on non-Tejano stations, 'Missing My Baby,' displays her wonderful vocal and emotional range and may become a posthumous hit."" there are double quotes inside double quotes, those should be changed to single quotes in all references this applies to, as per WP:MOSQUOTE and MOS:QUOTEMARKS
  • Any external links?
  • Categories should be sorted in alphabetical order

TBrandley 17:36, 23 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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