Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/September 25, 2024

Hello Wehwalt, Parsecboy and Z1720,

"Her keel was laid down at the Howaldtswerke shipyards in Kiel, launched on 25 September 1909, and commissioned on 23 August 1911."

that doesn't read well? It sounds as if the keel was launched and commissioned. Should it be changed to:

'Her keel was laid down at the Howaldtswerke shipyards in Kiel; she was launched on 25 September 1909, and commissioned on 23 August 1911.' or similar tweak?

"against the Russian Navy, including" - should that link be to Imperial Russian Navy? I can't discern. The hat at Russian Navy has "This article is about the modern navy formed in 1992 ..." but its infobox has active "1696–1917 (and) 1992–present" JennyOz (talk) 07:31, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Jenny - yes to both of those. Thanks for looking it over. Parsecboy (talk) 16:27, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]