Wikipedia talk:Wiki Ed/Massachusetts Institute of Technology /Workshop in Written Expression (Fall 2018)

I chose an article that shows one of the games. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2048_(video_game)

There are some problems on this article. First, the article uses "he" many times and moreover. it biased when it explains 48  both games have been described as viral and addictive.

Also, the picture that used in explanation distracts me and it should be more appropriate one that illustrates the game. — Preceding unsigned comment added by GoHashimoto (talk • contribs) 03:21, 16 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

2048( Video Game)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2048_(video_game)

There are some problems on this article. First, the article uses "he" many times and moreover. it biased when it explains 48  both games have been described as viral and addictive in the comparison section.Also, the picture that used in explanation distracts me and it should be more appropriate one that illustrates the game.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by GoHashimoto (talk • contribs) 03:24, 16 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]