Talk:A Boy and His Blob: Trouble on Blobolonia/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 12:30, 13 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

This is one of those games I have never played yet but which is on my list of games I'll try to play somewhen in the future. This article is short; it won't be long until I finish the review. I will finish it in 3 days at most.

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
[1] is a blog, and I can't find its about page. It is better to replace it with a more reliable source.
Done I've removed the last sentence and source, as it was not written by Kurt Kalata as per our list of reliable sources. ~ Hibana (talk) 14:19, 13 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
"lives at the top." - maybe just "life points"? "at the top" should be removed, as HUD is everytime at the top.
Done I removed "at the top" but called them "extra lives" since "life points" would not be accurate (the player dies after one hit). ~ Hibana (talk) 14:19, 13 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

ISSN check: one broken
- Done ~ Hibana (talk) 14:19, 13 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Dabsolver check: ok
Checklinks check: ok
Reflinks check: ok
"industry veteran" - why? how?
- Done Phrase removed. ~ Hibana (talk) 14:19, 13 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]
What does "three ways" in "However, the plans never came to fruition due to deadlines and difficulty in dividing production resources three ways" means?
- Done ~ Hibana (talk) 14:19, 13 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Pass Good job!--♫GoP♫_T ^C _N 14:20, 13 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]