Talk:Beautiful, Dirty, Rich/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Hello, I will be reviewing this article. :) Pyrrhus16 09:00, 27 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Lead:

Is it possible to wikilink burning money, both here and in the music video section? I think readers would find the article interesting.

Music video:

"There were two versions of the video"-->There are two versions of the video
"and another which was the official video"-->and another which is the official video
"The video is set in a mansion, and starts with Gaga walking down a hallway with several people who are either walking behind her"-->The video is set in a mansion, and starts with Gaga making her way down a hallway with several people who are either walking behind her (or something similar in order to avoid the repetition in this sentence)

Everything else looks good, well done. Once you have addressed these concerns, please leave a note on my talk page and I should have no problem promoting this article to GA. :) Pyrrhus16 09:00, 27 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

As the main contributor appears to be blocked, I have made these changes myself. The article now passes its GAN, and is a Good Article. Pyrrhus16 09:14, 27 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]