Talk:Bless Me Indeed (Jabez's Song)

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Good articleBless Me Indeed (Jabez's Song) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starBless Me Indeed (Jabez's Song) is part of the Almost There (album) series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
June 5, 2016Good article nomineeListed
February 8, 2023Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Bless Me Indeed (Jabez's Song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 00:59, 3 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Infobox[edit]

  • Please remove the "Chronology" parameter form the infobox; thanks

Lead[edit]

  • Add the year 2000 in parentheses after the title of the book The Prayer of Jabez please

Background and composition[edit]

Paragraph 1[edit]

  • Again, please add the year 2000 in parentheses after the title of the book The Prayer of Jabez so it appears exactly as so: "The Prayer of Jabez (2000)"
    • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
    • No source for the sentence that describes where the song was recorded; please add one

Paragraph 2[edit]

Reception and chart performance[edit]

  • If you wanted, I would even turn this into two separate sections

Paragraph 1[edit]

  • The 'm' in "Allmusic" needs to be capitalized
  • Are there any other reviews available this section is quite small; perhaps some album reviews that include this track?
    • I worked extensively on the album this song is on, Almost There, and out of those I got the reviews mentioned here. I could only find one more review, from Amazon (http://www.amazon.com/Almost-There-MercyMe/dp/B000062Y7I). Is that reliable or no? Toa Nidhiki05 18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Paragraph 2[edit]

  • Nothing to say here! :)

Credits and personnel[edit]

  • Remove the parentheses around "Credits from the album liner notes"; it's unnecessary
  • Unlink "MercyMe", they are already linked several times in this article

Charts[edit]

  • Looks good

Other notes[edit]

  • Mainly, please take care of the copyright notice at the header of the article
    • Frankly not sure what to do with it. The copyright justification used on the song File:Bless Me Indeed.ogg is standard. There's nothing wrong with it - it's low-quality, less than 10% of the song, etc. The only reason it is tagged is I had a user come through and decide to tag several of my pages at good article for whatever reason . His justification here was "Incomplete non-free use rationale. Picky, but this is at GAC". Pretty sure I can't remove the notice myself. Toa Nidhiki05 18:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add an "External links" section that includes a MetroLyrics link to the official lyrics of the song
  • The category "Debut singles" could be added since this is technically MercyMe's debut single

End of GA Review:[edit]

A very short article, but with great depth and good use of resources. I will place on hold for seven days to allow the nominator to make any changes, good luck! Carbrera (talk) 01:08, 3 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]