Talk:Boku no Natsuyasumi

Boku no Natsuyasumi has been listed as one of the Video games good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: May 23, 2023. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Boku no Natsuyasumi appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 13 June 2023 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that when Kaz Ayabe pitched his video game Boku no Natsuyasumi to Sony, he said that illustrator Mineko Ueda was interested in the project even though they had never actually met?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2023/June. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Boku no Natsuyasumi.

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Attribution[edit]

The original version of this article incorporated text copied from the Wikipedia article Boku no Natsuyasumi 3. -- But|seriously|folks 05:20, 1 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Mixup[edit]

This article describes release dates for the first game in the series, and gameplay/story elements from the third game released seven years later. Southsailor (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 14:23, 4 February 2010 (UTC).[reply]

Did you know nomination[edit]

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by BorgQueen (talk) 00:00, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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... that when Kaz Ayabe pitched Sony on his video game Boku no Natsuyasumi, he told them that illustrator Mineko Ueda was interested in the project, though in truth they had never actually met? Source: Scroll
- Reviewed: The Dorilton, Unlock It, Victorian era
- Comment: Boku no Natsuyasumi is a 5x expansion (and was also just promoted to GA), Kaz Ayabe and Mineko Ueda are newly created.

5x expanded by Morgan695 (talk). Self-nominated at 21:10, 22 May 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Boku no Natsuyasumi; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: - Not done

Overall:

@Morgan695: Good articles. Just need 3 QPQs. Onegreatjoke (talk) 03:15, 23 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Onegreatjoke: Hi, QPQs have been completed. Morgan695 (talk) 16:01, 23 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Approve all. Onegreatjoke (talk) 18:17, 23 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Boku no Natsuyasumi/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Cukie Gherkin (talk · contribs) 00:55, 23 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section):

b. (citations to reliable sources):

c. (OR):

d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects):

b. (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

[1] Might be worthwhile to discuss the forthcoming fan translation, as well as this source: [2] as a citation for a fan translation being in-demand for this game.
Would it be possible to cite that the mobile port has yet to be released? Such as an RS with a "TBA" date?
I wonder if it's best to have the creator's feelings on this game be a part of Reception.
Be sure to archive the links when you get the chance

None of these would prevent passing, though for the former I think it'd be worthwhile to mention it. - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 10:08, 23 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]