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Reads too much like an advertisement for the school. If not changed, this will most likely be nominated for deletion in the future. Jazznutuva 13:58, 27 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
I appreciate the comments but it's difficult not to mention our assets of the school! I'm not trying to sell it to anyone but will try to edit to keep all happy!
Kind regards
Still reads too much like an advert. Achievements but no criticisms? Even the reply to Jazznutuva sounds like an advert: "it's difficult not to mention our assets" 15:22, 20 May 2007 (UTC)
I've edited out Achievements, renamed it and removed some content too. Many thanks for the feedback, I'm new to WikiPedia'ing! I'd based it and worded it in the same manner as many other schools in the local vicinity but I appreciate that those postings might not be to everyone's liking too. Kind regards (86.151.207.51 00:02, 25 May 2007 (UTC))[reply]
