Talk:Edward H. Hume

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Lead and notability[edit]

Although I'm sure this fellow is notable, I can't really gauge why from the article. An improvement to the lead would be to explain why he is here first, then go on to describe his life. PRB (talk) 10:53, 28 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I augmented the text and added references, also beefed up the lead. Hope this is useful ch (talk) 05:47, 29 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]