Talk:Flåm Line

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DateProcessResult
March 6, 2012Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on June 17, 2011.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the Flåm Line, originally operated with El 9 locomotives, is the steepest standard gauge railway in Europe?

Operator[edit]

Trains on this line is operated by Flåm Utvikling AS (see [1]), but I believe/assume the railway itself is owned by "Jernbaneverket". Listing Norges Statsbaner as the operator is completely wrong. Vibrog (talk) 18:26, 27 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

"Operator" refers to who operates the trains, not the infrastructure, which is listed as "owner". Arsenikk (talk) 12:03, 7 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Tunnels [2] -- Vibrog (talk) 07:43, 28 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 09:40, 27 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Can you add the coordinates?♦ Dr. Blofeld 09:43, 27 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lead
  • Myrdal doesn't link to a settlement.
    • I've fixed the link and I'll make an article when I have a little more time. Arsenikk (talk) 13:28, 3 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Route
  • Myrdal link needs fixing.
  • The digits you've added like 20.20, 2.20, 4.40 etc I think the zero is superfluous and it would be better as 20.2, 2.2, 4.4 etc.♦ Dr. Blofeld 09:48, 27 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the valley widens and changes character, becoming flatter and filled with more contrast." What is meant by "filled with more contrast"?♦ Dr. Blofeld 09:51, 27 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    • I've rephrased a little; although not as true to the source, I it definitively accurate, as the upper part of the line as more barren. Arsenikk (talk) 13:28, 3 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
History

The currency figures. It would be useful to see some currency conversion into dollars or something as NOK 3.5 million could be anything! I think it would give non Norwegian readers a better perspective. Although historical conversions may be significantly different. Just a suggestion anyway.♦ Dr. Blofeld 09:55, 27 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I have come across this discussion before, and there is consensus that conversion, particularly of historical values, will not give an encyclopedic result without bias. Arsenikk (talk) 13:28, 3 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Operations

"By then ridership had reached 175,000" What do you mean? 175,000 passengers per annum? Can you reword to make clearer?♦ Dr. Blofeld 13:40, 27 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Section has quite a few red links. Do you plan on blue linking any?♦ Dr. Blofeld 13:45, 27 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • Some of the links (Gudvangen Tunnel, B3, Myrdal) are on my short list, the others I might create one day; they are all clearly notable topics. I no longer really like to create many stub articles, instead preferring somewhat longer articles, thus I don't "fill inn" as many red links any more. Arsenikk (talk) 13:28, 3 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much for the review. Sorry for the delay, but I am traveling and have limited access to the Internet. I will probably not be able to follow up on any issues until I return home on 5 April. Arsenikk (talk) 13:28, 3 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

Seems to meet requirements.♦ Dr. Blofeld 10:37, 6 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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rolling stock is outdated[edit]

it is no longer using El 17 but El 18.84.212.111.156 (talk) 00:47, 30 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]