Talk:Glen H. Taylor

Glen H. Taylor was nominated as a History good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (January 10, 2013). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated.

Biography: Politics and Government

	Biography portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Biography, a collaborative effort to create, develop and organize Wikipedia's articles about people. All interested editors are invited to join the project and contribute to the discussion. For instructions on how to use this banner, please refer to the documentation.BiographyWikipedia:WikiProject BiographyTemplate:WikiProject Biographybiography articles
	This article is supported by the politics and government work group.

U.S. Congress Low‑importance

	United States portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject U.S. Congress, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of the United States Congress on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.U.S. CongressWikipedia:WikiProject U.S. CongressTemplate:WikiProject U.S. CongressU.S. Congress articles
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.
	This article is about one (or many) person(s).

United States: Idaho / Presidential elections Low‑importance

	United States portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject United States, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of topics relating to the United States of America on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the ongoing discussions. Template Usage Articles Requested! Become a Member Project Talk Alerts United StatesWikipedia:WikiProject United StatesTemplate:WikiProject United StatesUnited States articles
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.
	Idaho portal This article is supported by WikiProject Idaho (assessed as Low-importance).
	This article is supported by WikiProject U.S. presidential elections (assessed as Low-importance).

Removed unsourced quote[edit]

I removed this from the article:

'I remember him as an incredibly great "off the cuff" speaker and orator. He made a campaign speech to a crowd at the University of Chicago one evening, came on stage, took off his wristwatch, threw it into the audience and then told the young man who caught it that he would speak only for fifteen minutes and when the fifteen minutes were up the student who caught the watch was to stand up and say, "Glen, your time is up," and he would quit speaking. For fifteen minutes this man made a riproaring speech that had everyone mesmerized. And when the "time's up" was announced he stopped right in the middle of what he was saying, waved to the crowd and said goodnight. He broke up the audience. I never saw a performance like that in my life. It was an incredible experience.'

- Unknown

An unsourced quotation attributed to "unknown" isn't quite what I'd call verifiable... -Elmer Clark (talk) 08:21, 23 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Glen H. Taylor/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 13:15, 3 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be glad to do this review.

One issue that I see right off the bat is that several quotations need citation:
- " O GIVE US A HOME, NEAR THE CAPITAL DOME, WITH A YARD FOR TWO CHILDREN TO PLAY"
- "You may have broken my jaw, but I just broke your back!!!"
- "They could end our petty arguments on earth." He went on to say that no matter what the UFOs turned out to be, they "can't be laughed off."
- "Even if it is only a psychological phenomenon, it is a sign of what the world is coming to," Taylor explained. "If we don't ease the tensions, the whole world will be full of psychological cases and eventually turn into a global nuthouse."
- "I was 18, a juvenile leading man in a traveling show, and my hair had begun to fall out. There isn't much demand for bald juvenile leading men, and I tried everything - sheep dip, what have you - and that just made it fall out faster."
The claim "By 1960 Taylor Topper Inc. had become the major manufacturer of hair replacements in the United States" also needs a citation.
I would suggest somewhat expanding this article's lead so that its summary includes every section (and preferably subsection) of the article.
The Roswell comment seems rather trivial to get such weight in the article, and is also uncited. Is this considered important to understanding his policies? Or famous among UFO buffs? I'm not sure this needs an indepedent subsection.

Once these initial points have been addressed, I'll go on to a close readthrough of the article for prose issues; after that, I'll start the criteria checklist. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 13:15, 3 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'm marking this as not ready for listing at this time. There's clearly a potential good article here, though, so I'd encourage you to address the above and resubmit in the future. Many thanks for your work. -- Khazar2 (talk) 12:10, 10 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]