Talk:Kimiyo

Article improvement

Hello, I'm new at this. Can anyone help me improve the article? Thank you. Joan Million (talk) 12:21, 15 April 2024 (UTC)

Hello, Joan Million. My view is that the article is currently much too focussed on what the musician has to say about their own work. An encyclopaedia article should minimize that, and be principally based on what the best independent sources say about it.--Gronk Oz (talk) 01:26, 17 April 2024 (UTC)