Talk:Michel Sadelain

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Review[edit]

Some remarks after the first pass:

"Sadelain was born in France where he earned his M.D. at the University of Paris, France in 1984." - ref needed, not supported by the provided inline source.
The Research section needs ref formatting, obviously.
Refs needed for the last two entries in the Awards section.
Some work left to be done on formatting in general.

Otherwise it's a fine article and I see no problems. I'll do a second pass once inline refs are completed. GregorB (talk) 20:25, 31 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello GregorB, Can you take another look at the sandbox? I think I have addressed the issues with referencing and formatting. With that said, I have a bit of reference syntax cleanup to complete. Let me know what you think!--Chefmikesf (talk) 00:06, 4 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Chefmikesf! First of all, sorry for failing to finish the review sooner, I got interrupted a couple of times by off-wiki stuff.

Let me add some final remarks. This is a fine article in terms of sourcing and neutrality. There is no doubt that the subject of the article meets the notability guidelines, such as WP:PROF #1 (at the very least). Some minor tweaks may still be needed, but these are essentially technical (such as ref formatting) and may be done later, in article space (in fact, I will do some tweaks myself).

The categories are missing, they need to be added first. (In my opinion this should also count as a uncontroversial edit w.r.t. WP:COIU, as long as categorization is supported by the sources provided in the article.) GregorB (talk) 19:03, 16 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Moved to article space, two categories added. GregorB (talk) 19:12, 16 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

This really came together and looks great GregorB! Thank you for the guidance and help on this article. I will take another pass and makes some updates to formatting and syntax as well.--Chefmikesf (talk) 01:51, 22 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Michel Sadelain Article Updates[edit]

Hello again :@Boghog: I came across your name again reading the Gene therapy article. Michel Sadelain has new articles about his work in the space and I noticed inaccuracies and typos on his Wikipedia article. I used the secondary sources to clean up the article and made additions to the article. Would you be open to reviewing my sandbox?--Chefmikesf (talk) 19:41, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Chefmikesf. Thank you for your contributions. Your edits to the Michel Sadelain article look good to me. My only comment is to watch out for WP:PEACOCK terms, such as "~~ample~~ use", "~~was pivotal in the design of~~ designed", "~~effective~~ target", and "Sadelain also ~~devised how to~~ designed". Cheers. Boghog (talk) 03:41, 27 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Boghog: Thanks for the feedback. Let me do another round of edits and I'll reach back out.--Chefmikesf (talk) 16:28, 27 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Boghog: I made your suggested edits to the sandbox, would you feel comfortable at this point to replace the current version of the article with this sandbox version?--Chefmikesf (talk) 19:15, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Chefmikesf: Thanks for editing your draft. It now looks good to move to main space. Cheers. ^[1]

@Boghog: Since I have a COI with the subject, would you allow me to make the updates? If so, I will repost this conversation on the article talk page. If not, I will wait for you to update the article.--Chefmikesf (talk) 17:35, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Chefmikesf: Thanks for clarifying that you have a conflict of interest. After reviewing your sandbox, I have no objections if you make the updates and feel free to reference this discussion. Cheers. Boghog (talk) 15:41, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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