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Jobs father

Steve Jobs is actually from Cameroun and his biological father is Steve Belinga — Preceding unsigned comment added by 206.167.44.35 (talk) 21:03, 12 November 2017 (UTC)

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Semi-protected edit request on 6 February 2018

In the sidebar, please change Steve Jobs' cause of death to Pancreatic Neuroendrocine Cancer instead of simply Pancreatic Cancer. They are not the same form of cancer, are treated differently, diagnosed differently and have significantly different symptoms. The link to Pancreatic Neuroendocrine Tumors is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pancreatic_neuroendocrine_tumor. The body of the Wikipedia page states the correct diagnosis and cause, but the sidebar lists the wrong cause of death. So the page is inconsistent. Also, under the section titled "death", the copy that reads "islet-cell neuroendocrine pancreatic cancer" should link to https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pancreatic_neuroendocrine_tumor instead of to https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pancreatic_cancer as they are different diseases, different forms of cancer. The full form of cancer should link to the right cancer, instead of just a fraction of the sentence linking to the wrong cancer. MichaelKlouda (talk) 19:44, 6 February 2018 (UTC)

 Done Nihlus 21:32, 6 February 2018 (UTC)

Childhood etc

There seems way too much information about his birth and childhood, especially his biological family.--Jack Upland (talk) 07:27, 24 February 2018 (UTC)

Do you propose we remove something? Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 21:01, 24 February 2018 (UTC)
I think it could easily be shortened.--Jack Upland (talk) 00:34, 25 February 2018 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 25 April 2018

Change the birth name to Abdul Lateef Jandali https://gulfnews.com/business/sectors/technology/steve-jobs-a-tribute-to-the-cousin-i-never-met-1.887022 94.113.207.67 (talk) 19:41, 25 April 2018 (UTC)

 Done Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 19:44, 25 April 2018 (UTC)

Alma Mater

It seems to be convention on Wikipedia to list colleges attended as part of of individual's "alma mater". Is there any reason why Reed College is not mentioned as part of this infobox field? BUjjsp (talk) 06:57, 17 May 2018 (UTC)

That is incorrect, one's alma mater has a connotation to it that signals one's graduation from a university. For subjects whose attendance/graduation/majors/dates is ambiguous or disputed (e.g. Natalie Portman, Bill Gates, Mark Zuckerberg etc.) the alma mater (or education) parameter is not used as it is misleading. If readers are interested in a subject's education it is but a scroll away in the early life and education section. LivinRealGüd (talk) 17:15, 24 May 2018 (UTC)
Hmm interesting, it seems that some other pages include all institutions attended in the infobox "alma mater" section (see Steve Wozniak for example). Is there any Wikipedia guideline that can help clear this up officially? Thanks. BUjjsp (talk) 06:08, 6 June 2018 (UTC)

Disputed information: Birth name

The Wikipedia page claims that Steve Jobs name at birth was Abdul Lateef Jandali. The only reference is from a GulfNews article written by someone claiming to be his cousin. There is no documented proof that his birth name is Abdul Lateef Jandali. The notes section also claims that his name was changed to Steven Jobs. Can someone independently verify his birth name before posting this on Wikipedia? I am requesting all information related to Abdul Lateef Jandali be removed from the Steve Jobs Wikipedia page until it can be independently verified and documented that his name at birth was indeed Abdul Lateef Jandali. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sookie7 (talk • contribs) 03:48, 18 May 2018 (UTC)

Agreed. LivinRealGüd (talk) 17:15, 24 May 2018 (UTC)
@Sookie7: @LivinRealGüd: Disagreed. Rovingrobert (talk) 13:24, 2 July 2018 (UTC)
Agreed w/ @Rovingrobert:. LivinRealGüd (talk) 13:44, 2 July 2018 (UTC)

The articles referenced from Huffington Post uses the Gulf news article as a reference. The Indonesian article has no reference. This leads us back to the Gulf news article written by someone who admits they never met or talked to Steve Jobs. I have searched and have not been able to find any other sources that Steve Jobs had another name. I assume someone who knew him personally would have verified this long ago, but they have not. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sookie7 (talk • contribs) 02:18, 8 July 2018 (UTC)

had HIV/AIDS?

https://wikileaks.org/wiki/Steve_Jobs_purported_HIV_medical_status_results,_2008

Why does wikipedia not mention this? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 84.212.172.64 (talk) 13:40, 30 September 2018 (UTC)

Because Wikipedia is based on reliable sources and isn't a collection of rumors. (Check the meaning of "purported" in a dictionary.) Largoplazo (talk) 18:00, 30 September 2018 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 15 December 2018

this page has too many main sections, the first 4 sections (Background, Childhood, Homestead High, Reed College) should be sub sections under an "Early life" section, similar to Bill Gates' page. Wisqy (talk) 23:33, 15 December 2018 (UTC)

 Not done. Please get consensus on this talk page first. It might help for you to provide a suggested structure for the headers and subheaders. – Jonesey95 (talk) 02:54, 16 December 2018 (UTC)
He is not dead. A clone of him was thought to have been dead in 2014. He is alive! 81.131.36.98 (talk) 16:06, 15 January 2019 (UTC) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wlXMOn8ia0g, https://observer.com/2014/08/selfie-sparks-theories-that-steve-jobs-is-alive-hiding-in-brazil/ CHECK THE SOURCE! HE IS NOT DEAD! 81.131.36.98 (talk) 16:06, 15 January 2019 (UTC)
From the link: "It’s now been proven that this is not — as we suspected — a photo of present-day Steve Jobs. As Valleywag recently uncovered, the man in the background of the Reddit selfie is actually Andy Hahn, a former editor of Sport Fishing magazine who suffers from ALS." Demonstrable hoax. Ivanvector (Talk/Edits) 16:25, 15 January 2019 (UTC)
You serious? 81.131.36.98 (talk) 16:29, 15 January 2019 (UTC)

Typo in into?

First sentence reads: Steven Paul Jobs (/dʒɒbz/; February 24, 1955 – October 5, 2011) was an American business magnate and investor. What does /dʒɒbz/ mean? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Toothbrush1 (talk • contribs) 16:59, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

It's a pronunciation guide using the International Phonetic Alphabet. It's linked, and it will take you to a full explanation. The pronunciation is provided because one might reasonably think it's derived from the name "Job" (as Stevens is from Steven and Peters is from Peter) and, therefore, that it should be pronounced with the long "o" in that name. The IPA representation shown means it's pronounced like the ordinary noun "jobs". Largoplazo (talk) 17:19, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 25 January 2019

DarkRiderHyper (talk) 18:44, 25 January 2019 (UTC)

Bill Gates Stole from Steven Paul Jobs

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. DannyS712 (talk) 18:45, 25 January 2019 (UTC)

Cause of death

His cause of death was pancreatic neuroendocrine tumor, not pancreatic cancer. Quantumtw (talk) 19:16, 18 February 2019 (UTC)

Quantumtw, please provide a WP:RS to support your statement. Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 20:40, 18 February 2019 (UTC)

Jobs' attire

The paragraph that starts out, "Jobs usually went to work wearing a black long-sleeved mock turtleneck made by Issey Miyake..." is in an odd place. It implies by the flow that he was dressing that way in his earliest Apple days, and he was not. That came much, much later. It's an important piece of info, but it should be moved to be given better context.

$427

The figure of $427 million is incorrect. It is $429 million. In any case you should 'cn'.

Unnecessary HTML code that ruins the reading experience Space1230 (talk) 03:39, 17 May 2018 (UTC)

Unnessary html code under the section pre-Apple after talking about how Brennan accepted Job's money (unnessary code following)(:{{{1}}}</ref>) make sure not to delete (

) If this shows up as actual html code check the page's html and find my post to read my post as intended

HIV

Considering the recent Wikileaks dump, would it be appropriate to say Jobs was HIV-positive? Exodvs (talk) 23:58, 14 April 2019 (UTC)

No. Wikileaks is considered an unreliable source. See Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Perennial sources. Largoplazo (talk) 00:16, 15 April 2019 (UTC)
Yes. Jobs was HIV positive. He obviously died from AIDS. If it really was cancer it was Kaposi's sarcoma, a consequence of AIDS. https://file.wikileaks.org/file/steve-jobs-hiv 86.187.174.244 (talk)

Fake News?

"He said his choice was inspired by that of Stuart Geman, a noted applied mathematics professor at Brown University." Not true. SGeman (talk) 21:37, 19 April 2019 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 8 May 2019

Supporting evidence or a citation should be used to substantiate this line: "Steve Jobs played a pivotal role in shaping the future of computer animation." 198.166.214.4 (talk) 15:48, 8 May 2019 (UTC)

I've removed the sentence until a source can be provided. NiciVampireHeart 10:33, 9 May 2019 (UTC)

Pages needed

When I came upon this article today, I discovered that most of the information on Jobs's birth, adoption, childhood, and teenaged years was improperly sourced. The sources are listed, but they are books. No page numbers are included. There are tags all over the place that have been there since March 2018. I just removed some material and added some sources, but there is a lot more to be done. I am a bit surprised that an article on a high-profile subject like Jobs would be this sloppy. Where is everyone who has been editing this page? Is the plan just to leave it the way it is? SunCrow (talk) 01:56, 19 August 2019 (UTC)

"Steve P. Jobs" listed at Redirects for discussion

An editor has asked for a discussion to address the redirect Steve P. Jobs. Please participate in the redirect discussion if you wish to do so. James-the-Charizard (talk) 03:35, 21 August 2019 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 18 September 2019

Steve jobs made apple before a lot of people thought he did 165.139.150.133 (talk) 11:40, 18 September 2019 (UTC)

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. Ivanvector (Talk/Edits) 12:14, 18 September 2019 (UTC)

Syrian, swiss German

Steve's background the ethnicity was erased because "are we gonna go all the way Back to lucy" which is an absurb comment. To begin with, one generation back for US americans born to non US Americans is not abnormal in this or any other encyclopedia. in fact, it's not abnormal for many people born to parents that are not from the country of said human's birth. In addition, while beings the child of a Syrian Muslim had not effect in Steve Jobs that he was aware of, his adoption story and he fact that he was subsequently raised raised by his parents, with the knowledge he was adopted was bound to influence the personality of Steve Jobs. Also, his parents making sure he went to college, was entirely influnced by his birth mother, he feeling on the type of family he should go to after his adoption. Which to restate was entirely because jis mother was forbidden to marry his Syrian Muslim father. Finally, a compelling arguement can be nade that the white male Americans of Silicone Valley mythology was largely influnced by people like Steve Jobs. And while Steve Jobs likely considered himself white male and american christian, he was in fact a half Syrian of muslim descent. Meemsworldwide (talk) 21:22, 12 October 2019 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 20 October 2019

For the first citation under the "Family" section without a page number, "he apologized many times over for his behavior" and "said that he never took responsibility when he should have, and that he was sorry". These quotes can be found in The Bite in the Apple: A Memoir of My Life with Steve Jobs on page 220. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ffofanax (talk • contribs) 18:39, 20 October 2019 (UTC)

 Done: see Special:Diff/922709425. Verified via google books preview (link) Thanks, NiciVampireHeart 20:16, 23 October 2019 (UTC)

Sidebar incorrect about type of cancer

In the sidebar, it says that his cause of death was pancreatic cancer. But then in the Health Issues section, it clearly states it was a neuroendocrine tumor on his pancreas. The sidebar should therefore say that his cause of death was Neuroendocrine cancer. They are different cancers and because people use this shortcut (calling it pancreatic cancer when it’s a tumor on his pancreas), neuroendocrine cancer is not well known. RainbowOfLight Talk 00:23, 29 October 2019 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 12 November 2019

For the ipad section you need to update the models or latest models 207.28.27.68 (talk) 16:28, 12 November 2019 (UTC)

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. —KuyaBriBriTalk 17:02, 12 November 2019 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 6 December 2019

Steve Jobs cashier 11Mousepad22457 (talk) 14:00, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 14:05, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

Steve Jobs Article

When Jobs denied paternity, a DNA test established him as Lisa's father. It[clarification needed] required him to give Brennan $385 a month in addition to returning the welfare money she had received. Jobs gave her $500 a month at the time when Apple went public and Jobs became a millionaire.

pertaining: "clarification needed"; "It, Brennan's actions, required ...." (98.238.254.67 (talk) 06:37, 26 January 2020 (UTC))

We should add a section to discuss the Xerox controversy

A lot of people have this idea that Jobs somehow "stole" ideas from Xerox. This myth really should be dispelled.

I was watching a few interviews this week and not only did Jobs openly admit he worked with Xerox and copied their idea, the engineers who worked for Xerox openly state that Jobs actually tried to encourage Xerox to produce their computer.

Several of the Xerox engineers stated that Xerox failed to understand how important its computer was, and that they ended up moving to Apple because Xerox did not embrace its own technology.

Xerox actually abandoned its technology and its engineers went to Apple as a result. This information really should be included in the article to dispel the myth that it was stolen technology. It was very clearly abandoned and even Xerox own engineers state this.

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Family/Marriage/Children - move before Honors and awards

The subsection named Family for some reason was placed as part of the "1985-1997" (sections 1972-1985, 1985-1997, 1997-2011).

Also, making Health issues a significant level section, with Resignation and Death as subsections. Pi314m (talk) 19:23, 24 May 2020 (UTC)

Charity

Did Steve Jobs ever give anything to charity ? 2600:1702:2340:9470:640D:67AA:1B04:312D (talk) 02:12, 21 July 2020 (UTC)

Spouse in Infobox

  • Change this code in the infobox:
    {{marriage|[[Laurene Powell Jobs|Laurene Powell]]|March 18, 1991|<!--Year omitted per current instructions on Template:Marriage-->}}
  • To this code:
    {{marriage|[[Laurene Powell Jobs|Laurene Powell]]|March 18, 1991<!--Year omitted per current instructions on Template:Marriage-->}}
  • Reason for change:
    The marriage template call has an extraneous pipe ("|") after the marriage start date (March 18, 1991|), which causes the template to display "m. after 1991" for the marriage start date instead of "m. 1991".

– 108.56.139.120 (talk) 16:22, 4 September 2020 (UTC)

 Done —KuyaBriBriTalk 19:24, 4 September 2020 (UTC)

Birth name

HuffPost quotes Gulf News in stating Jobs' birth name was Abdul Lateef Jandali, a claim repeated by QI in the UK on Twitter. Has this already been discussed here, or should it be? -- AtomCrusher (talk) 00:03, 10 September 2020 (UTC)

There was a discussion here (no endorsement, just linking). --ZimZalaBim talk 01:44, 10 September 2020 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 11 October 2020

Changing the "was an American business magnate" statement to "was an Syrian-American business magnate" 2405:6E00:A08:EF00:D4A6:24EA:1DFE:3DE5 (talk) 05:42, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

 Not done. Please establish a consensus for such a potentially controversial change before making this request. –Deacon Vorbis (carbon • videos) 01:16, 12 October 2020 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 7 November 2020

{{subst:trim

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I found something wro — Preceding unsigned comment added by 45.64.243.239 (talk)

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Steve Jobs Vs bill gates

two computer pioneers.One with the in source.The other a marketer — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cold man frank (talk • contribs) 10:13, 29 November 2020 (UTC)

HIV

Wikileaks released a document saying Steve Jobs was HIV-positive.

--Azuizo (talk) 01:33, 19 December 2020 (UTC)
See WP:RS. Thanoscar21talkcontributions 21:07, 22 December 2020 (UTC)

Confusion re Birth

The sentence below (3rd para. under "Birth") is confusing. Jobs is presumably the subject of "admitted," but who is "she" in the quotation?

When Steve Jobs was in high school, admitted to his girlfriend, Chrisann Brennan, that she "was too frightened to love [Steve] for the first six months of his life ... I was scared they were going to take him away from me. Even after we won the case, Steve was so difficult a child that by the time he was two I felt we had made a mistake. I wanted to return him."[13]Rozsaphile1 (talk) 13:02, 22 April 2021 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 8 June 2021

104.34.102.20 (talk) 00:02, 8 June 2021 (UTC)


Steve job put his best into everything cherished everything every living second God Created for us

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. ◎ | melecie | t 00:22, 8 June 2021 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 21 June 2021

2600:1004:B074:C7FC:E184:99F0:987F:A73E (talk) 03:30, 21 June 2021 (UTC)you should not put out lies about people that did historic things in their lifetime. Do more research.
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Incorrect citation

The link attached to citation 252 leads to a strange Google Doc instead of the expected article referenced. Greatbluecomet (talk) 10:53, 18 February 2022 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 12 March 2022

I requested to change the yearbook photo to "File:Steve Jobs in 1969 Pegasus.jpg". I am not sure why my edit was reverted it was not vandalism. Change current yearbook photo to this one. 67.173.50.123 (talk) 21:53, 12 March 2022 (UTC)

 Not done for now: please establish a consensus for this alteration before using the {{edit semi-protected}} template. The other image appears to be better. ScottishFinnishRadish (talk) 04:03, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
Why is the current image better? This one has a better expression. 67.173.50.123 (talk) 18:07, 13 March 2022 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 18 March 2022

Change "Flags flying at half-staff outside Apple HQ in Cupertino, on the evening of Jobs's death" to "Flags flying at half-staff outside Apple Park in Cupertino, on the evening of Jobs's death", because Apple Park is the official name. 67.173.50.123 (talk) 01:13, 18 March 2022 (UTC)

 Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. I'm sure you're correct, but we need sources to support your request - FlightTime (open channel) 02:02, 18 March 2022 (UTC)

Ethnicity

Steve Jobs' biological father was Syrian, while his biological mother was of German and Swiss descent. Therefore, should he be placed into the categories American people of German descent, American people of Swiss descent, and American people of Syrian descent, or is it not notable enough? 2001:569:7F96:EE00:8111:8FB7:B8A8:9EF3 (talk) 23:33, 25 March 2022 (UTC)

 Done, Thanks. >>> Extorc.talk(); 05:09, 26 March 2022 (UTC)

Steve Jobs

Created the first IPhone and started Apple. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 209.12.128.180 (talk) 22:26, 29 March 2022 (UTC)

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Semi-protected edit request on 17 June 2022

In the 2nd paragraph, change "Jobs attended Reed College in 1972 before withdrawing that same yea." to "Jobs attended Reed College in 1972 before withdrawing that same year." The word "year" was misspelt. Cmatthews94 (talk) 14:35, 17 June 2022 (UTC)

 Done SPF121188 (talk this way) (contribs) 14:37, 17 June 2022 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 19 June 2022

Remove the link to appleiphoneunlocking. This is a spam link and now redirects to a website created for abusive partners to stalk their victims. Among Us for POTUS (talk) 20:30, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

 Done >>> Ingenuity.talk(); 20:47, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 19 June 2022 (2)

Remove http://www.iphone5reviewed.com/wordpress/2011/11/04/iphone-history-read-about-the-iphone-story-here/ - the source isn't relevant to anywhere it is cited and I've never heard of it. The archive link for it does not work either, and it is now offline. I believe it is another spam link just like the other one I mentioned earlier, this page may require some investigation to see if there are other spam links and who ended up adding them. Among Us for POTUS (talk) 23:04, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

 Done Best regards, Vukky TalkGuestbook 15:44, 30 June 2022 (UTC)

Ref error

There's a ref tag error in the Death section. 84.15.172.68 (talk) 08:20, 6 August 2022 (UTC)

 Done MadGuy7023 (talk) 11:22, 6 August 2022 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 28 October 2022

iPhone

Jobs unveiling the iPhone at MacWorld Conference & Expo on January 9, 2007 Main article: iPhone Apple began work on the first iPhone in 2005 and the first iPhone was released on June 29, 2007. The iPhone created such a sensation that a survey indicated six out of ten Americans were aware of its release. Time declared it "Invention of the Year" for 2007 and included it in the All-TIME 100 Gadgets list in 2010, in the category of Communication.[

iPhone Apple, joined with AT&T came out with the first iPhone "smartphone" ever created and was released January 9, 2007. 

Ha, Peter (October 25, 2010). "All-TIME 100 Gadgets - TIME". Time. ISSN 0040-781X. Archived from the original on August 2, 2021. Retrieved October 9, 2021. Cutie820 (talk) 01:47, 28 October 2022 (UTC)
 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. — Paper9oll (🔔 • 📝) 14:24, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 11 March 2023

Can I please edit this page? E.user4 (talk) 14:00, 11 March 2023 (UTC)

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. Aoidh (talk) 14:01, 11 March 2023 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 6 November 2022 add Wozniak hyperlink

In first mention of the neame Wozniak I would like it to hyperlink to his wikipedia page (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Steve_Wozniak). Thanks Lightning321 (talk) 06:41, 6 November 2022 (UTC)

 Not done: It already is a link; am I missing something? 3mi1y (talk) 07:52, 6 November 2022 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 5 November 2022 on Steve Studying Zen error

The article states in the intro that:

"In 1974, he traveled through India seeking enlightenment and studying Zen Buddhism." You don't study Zen in India.

Under the "Pre Apple" section the article gives the correct information that: "Jobs traveled to India in mid-1974[57] to visit Neem Karoli Baba[58] at his Kainchi ashram with his Reed friend (and eventual Apple employee) Daniel Kottke, searching for spiritual enlightenment. When they got to the Neem Karoli ashram, it was almost deserted because Neem Karoli Baba had died in September 1973. Then they made a long trek up a dry riverbed to an ashram of Haidakhan Babaji."

Steve didn't go to India to study Zen Buddhism. He went to practice under a Hindu Yogi. Mpcahn (talk) 20:45, 5 November 2022 (UTC)

 Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. 💜  melecie  talk - 04:41, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
Anther editor needs to chack this. 103.21.175.109 (talk) 05:49, 6 November 2022 (UTC)

As detailed in Isaacson (34-49) and other sources already cited in the article, Jobs had read about several Eastern spiritual traditions before he went to India, including Zen. He went to India to learn from Hindu teachers, and upon returning to California he pursued Zen. The text should instead say: "In 1974, he traveled through India seeking spiritual enlightenment before pursuing Zen Buddhism." 67.180.143.89 (talk) 02:02, 7 November 2022 (UTC)

 Done Though the sentence may need to be further refined, the factual inaccuracy of the statement needed to be addressed. Aoidh (talk) 02:18, 7 November 2022 (UTC)

Messi

Dad's house and the second time around — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A01:9700:114B:C500:F850:C53F:B8B9:53FC (talk) 09:30, 2 January 2023 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 8 January 2023

Died where 2405:201:C002:3036:51AC:99D0:9B78:4080 (talk) 10:44, 8 January 2023 (UTC)

The article states this at Steve Jobs#Death: "Jobs died at his Palo Alto, California, home around 3 p.m. (PDT) on October 5, 2011, due to complications...", so this is already discussed in the article. --Mvqr (talk) 15:42, 8 January 2023 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 29 January 2023

Incorrect grammar in the 2nd sentences in the Philanthropy section. i'm not sure the sentences intent.

change: He maintained privacy over his occasional few such actions which were publicly known. to: He maintained privacy over his few such actions which were publicly known. Aoeinasdfn (talk) 06:53, 29 January 2023 (UTC)

 Done reworded to He maintained privacy even over what few of these actions where publicly known small jars tc 12:31, 29 January 2023 (UTC)

currency equivalence

need to update inflation-adjusted currency equivalence years to 2023 216.164.249.213 (talk) 10:34, 22 February 2023 (UTC)

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