The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Lightbursttalk 21:42, 28 October 2023 (UTC)
... that when she was elected to the New Zealand parliament, Catherine Wedd defeated her former coworker at a marketing company? Source: "...befitting their days working together at Attn Marketing PR in Havelock North. Now the two women are pitted head-to-head, with Lorck the incumbent Labour MP for Tukituki and Wedd confirmed as National candidate for the October 14 general election." from [Herald article]
Comment: This bio was originally part of a mass DYK nomination from 17 October, i.e. on time. We've agreed to nominate five of them individually, including this one. QPQ from the original nomination. Thanks to Vaticidalprophet for the hook.
Overall: I'd recommend reordering the hook a bit for clarity, naming Lorck and dropping the detail about the kind of company that it was, as that's not the interesting part of the hook. Something like:
I'd recommend reordering the hook a bit for clarity, naming Lorck and dropping the detail about the kind of company that it was, as that's not the interesting part of the hook. Something like: