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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 12:58, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
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- ... that a naviduct can cost over €55 million?
- Reviewed: Derby Black Friary
- Comment: I review more articles than I nominate. Last one reviewed was May 2013.
Created by Wikiwayman (talk). Self nominated at 09:24, 26 July 2013 (UTC).
- The first problems I noticed were that the hook is not directly referenced and two paragraphs are unreferenced. King Jakob C2 01:25, 27 July 2013 (UTC)
- Ref #6 shows that the Krabbersgat naviduct cost €55 million before tax, therefore I didn't think I was stretching things too far with my hook wording. I don't want to put too much detail in the hook as it detracts from its "hookiness". I'm trying to find an online ref for the partially-referenced paragraphs (they were not completely un-referenced), otherwise I'll have to use a Dutch-language book source. Perhaps ALT1 would be a compromise once I've sorted the citations? Wikiwayman (talk) 18:30, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that one naviduct cost over €55,000,000?
- ALT 1 is better. However, one paragraph is still unreferenced and another is almost unreferenced. King Jakob C2 21:08, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
- I've now tidied up the text so that it is covered by online references without deleting anything of importance. Wikiwayman (talk) 12:18, 30 July 2013 (UTC)
