Template:Did you know nominations/Nirbheek
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 18:59, 30 January 2014 (UTC)
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Nirbheek[edit]
- ... that the Nirbheek is India's first gun for women?
Created by AntanO (talk). Self nominated at 08:12, 25 January 2014 (UTC).
Fails on size: "Prose size (text only): 724 B (124 words) "readable prose size"" - that's about under half of the rule of thumb for not being a WP:STUB. Ping me when this is expanded. Also, strip references to bare URLs and feed them through WP:REFLINK so they'll have nicer cite web formatting. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 11:20, 25 January 2014 (UTC)
- Piotrus, could you have a look again? Btw, I could not use REFLINK tool and I manually formatted the cite web. I received message "No changes were necessary in [[Nirbheek]]" when I tried with both Reflinks tools. Thanks.--Anton·٠•●♥Talk♥●•٠· 13:51, 25 January 2014 (UTC)
It's up to 2026 characters (0 words) "readable prose size" now, so the size is good. — Maile (talk) 00:54, 26 January 2014 (UTC)
Length and date is ok. But the hook is not directed referenced. Also, the hook stretches the fact, the new aspect of this gun is the marketing. There are no gender bars on who can or can't buy it. Also, there are some odd claims like that women in India would be barred from gun licenses, which would need to be rewritten. --Soman (talk) 04:13, 27 January 2014 (UTC)
Fixed The hook is directed to references. --Anton·٠•●♥Talk♥●•٠· 05:21, 27 January 2014 (UTC)
