User talk:Anwegmann/Archives/2023/September

About your changes in the articles 2022–23 FC Chornomorets Odesa season and 2023–24 FC Chornomorets Odesa season

Now more than once, you have wholesale reverted needed grammatical edits at 2022–23 FC Chornomorets Odesa season. An article is not a proprietary space. When edits are needed, as was the case at 2022–23 FC Chornomorets Odesa season, it is acceptable for anyone to make them, if done correctly. My grammatical corrections have not changed the meanings of the sentences, and they have fixed glaring and obvious problems in each sentence. You have, however, undone each of them, reverting the sentences to their previous incorrect forms. This borders on violations of WP:NOTHERE and WP:COMPETENCE. If you are unable to recognize the grammatical mistakes you are making in writing the sentences in the "Timeline" section of this article, you might want to reconsider whether you are capable of continuing to edit on the English-language version of Wikipedia. If you are unwilling to allow someone else to edit a page due to a feeling of propriety over it, or for any other reason at all, please review WP:CO to remind yourself that Wikipedia is by nature collaborative. Anwegmann (talk) 01:01, 19 September 2023 (UTC)

>My grammatical corrections have not changed...

Your "corrections" have changed the content: For example you have deleted information about friendly match Zimbru-Chornomorets played July 9, 2022. Why? Every professional soccer team in the world plays friendly matches. What is so wrong in the case? Moreover, as you deleted it you added a comment "senseless". Why this information is senseless?

>You have, however, undone each of them, reverting the sentences to their previous incorrect forms.

I think it is not true. I revised and corrected sentences. They may not be 100% consistent with Wikipedia's style, but they were grammatically correct after my corrections.

Please show me an example using the em dash in a Wikipedia-article, you use by your "corrections"? I mean your constructions like following:
* any date—In the 1th round, and so on.

Web-wiki-warrior (talk) 07:04, 19 September 2023 (UTC)

Firstly, it's an en-dash, not an em-dash. And your revisions are neither grammatically correct nor in standard Wikipedia style. That's a major problem. You have reverted my corrections wholesale, reverting the sentences to incorrect forms. Also, your last sentence does not make sense. Please "revise" it and ask again. Anwegmann (talk) 14:42, 19 September 2023 (UTC)

>Firstly, it's an en-dash, not an em-dash.

FYI: The en dash is approximately the length of the letter N, and the em dash the length of the letter M. If I see the lenght of the dash sign you used, it seems for me like an em-dash. Anyway, you didn't explain why you used it in the article, and didn't give any example to see an similar example using of the dash in a en-wikipedia-article.

>And your revisions are neither grammatically correct nor in standard Wikipedia style.

imho not true ... According to your instructions/comments, I've corrected sentences and put them into a correct grammatical form.

>That's a major problem.

imho it's not a problem

>You have reverted my corrections wholesale, reverting the sentences to incorrect forms.

As I mentioned above it's not true. I've corrected sentences and put them into a correct grammatical form.

>Also, your last sentence does not make sense. Please "revise" it and ask again.

Which sentence do you mean?

Web-wiki-warrior (talk) 11:05, 20 September 2023 (UTC)