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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (August 4)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by David.moreno72 were:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

External links in the body are not permitted

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David.moreno72 01:53, 4 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, David Clemens! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! David.moreno72 01:53, 4 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Mark Edmundson has a new comment[edit]

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Mark Edmundson. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 22:51, 19 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mark Edmundson (August 19)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This draft reads as if its purpose is to praise the subject rather than describe him neutrally.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 22:52, 19 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Editing help[edit]

I just made some improvements to the Draft:Mark Edmundson. It still needs a bit more sourcing but is better now. TimTempleton ^(talk) ^(cont) 19:32, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mark Edmundson (August 21)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by John from Idegon was:

Please address the deficits noted in the previous reviews before resubmitting.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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John from Idegon (talk) 06:39, 21 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Mark Edmundson[edit]

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Mark Edmundson, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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August 2018[edit]

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Thank you. Drm310 🍁 (talk) 16:59, 21 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your thread has been archived[edit]

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