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Week 2/XXcP

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Game#Chris_Crawford I made a minor change in the article. I found this processes is exciting, and we are actually making changes on sources online.XXcP (talk) 13:09, 31 March 2022 (UTC)

Here is the comparing link with what I did. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Game&type=revision&diff=1080300417&oldid=1060967869 One ward is not Capitalized. — Preceding unsigned comment added by XXcP (talk • contribs) 13:13, 31 March 2022 (UTC)

@XXcP Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:54, 1 April 2022 (UTC)
Yes18:01, 2 April 2022 (UTC)XXcP (talk) XXcP (talk) 18:01, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT Yes. XXcP (talk) 18:06, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
XXcP, Nice edits. Current with Week 2. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:44, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
@XXcP I do not see your Week 1; please complete or correct that before continuing with any other week. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:46, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

Week3-Nanjingnan123

n my week 2 assignment I made an edit on the NanjingThe edit was about updating a latest data about GDP in the Nanjing city, China, since the data was old back in 2019. Here is the diff https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Nanjing&diff=1080308311&oldid=1078880873 I learnt how to make an edit and renew some information from this process.--Nanjingnan123 (talk) 14:34, 31 March 2022 (UTC)

@Nanjingnan123 Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:27, 1 April 2022 (UTC)‍
I have assigned this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard, could you take a look it professor Nanjingnan123 (talk) 17:18, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
@Nanjingnan123 Your edit does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. Please find and cite a more reliable source, such as to an academic journal article or other high-quality reference and then ping me here when done. Please note: blogs, corporate websites, reviews, press releases, and opinion pieces generally do not count as reliable sources. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:57, 2 April 2022 (UTC)‍

Week 3 / NeverlandAriana

Hi professor, this week I work on a film Farewell My Concubine. I find there is a “citation needed” mark that the Chinese government banned the film in China when it was released. I do some research and find an article in the New York Times about the fact and the reasons, and add it as a citation. I also add some words to improve the statement. I learn how to cite a high-quality reference and add it to Wiki article this time. Here is the diff link：https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Farewell_My_Concubine_%28film%29&type=revision&diff=1080666218&oldid=1075689256--NeverlandAriana (talk) 17:18, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

@NeverlandAriana Nice edits and using of sourcing. Current with Week 3. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:59, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

Week3-Nanjingnan123

In my week 3 assignment, I edited the article NIke here is diff https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Nike,_Inc.&diff=1080670955&oldid=1080670839 I learnt how to add a citation that needs reliable source. The article is about Nike's marketing attempt, and some of its points demenstrate the ad agency of Nike. Through this process, I tried to find sources that can support the idea, which is interesting and meaningful.--Nanjingnan123 (talk) 17:48, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

@Nanjingnan123 Nice edit to this article. Current with Week 3. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:00, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 3/ JuggleY

The link to the article is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lag_(video_games)#Server-side , and the diff link is https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Lag_(video_games)&diff=prev&oldid=1080679688 . From this week 3 assignment, it is my first time to cite the references to the Wikipedia articles, and it is very easy to cite the references because of the automatic function. In addition, I find it hard to find the journal articles for my topic (lag in video games)JuggleY (talk) 19:04, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

@JuggleY Nice edits. Current with Week 3. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:07, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 1/XXcP

Hi everyone! This is XXcP Paul. I am new to Wikipedia and ready to learn and have fun in this experience.18:53, 2 April 2022 (UTC)XXcP (talk)

[User:XXcP|XXcP]] Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:03, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT I did use the sign, but somehow, it didn't show up. Here is the~~~~ XXcP (talk) 19:08, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
XXcP It seems you still had some odd code in here, but it is working now. Remember to always add that at the end of posts here. Current with Week 1 now. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:22, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 3/XXCP

I learned how to cite in Wikipedia and found the experience fun! Here is the link to the article. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Video_game_addiction Here is the change that I made in this article. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Video_game_addiction&type=revision&diff=1080678168&oldid=107847420418:48, 2 April 2022 (UTC)18:48, 2 April 2022 (UTC)~~ — Preceding unsigned comment added by XXcP (talk • contribs)

XXcP Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:01, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERTXXcP (talk) 19:09, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
@XXcP This did not work. Please review the training on how to do this and then reply here. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:23, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
@XXcP Never mind, I see what happened. You just needed a space. For future pings, make sure to include spaces between words. OK for now and Week 3 is now current and complete. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:24, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
Noted! Thank you! I got it now. XXcP (talk) 19:29, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

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Week 1, Week 2 & Week 3 for assigned article 1/Aashima99

Hey everyone, I am Aashima a student in third semester MASY program. Taking the RPM class was not a choice for me but I have learnt a few really interesting things so far in this class. I completed the training modules for week 1 and week 2 about how to copyedit an article on wikipedia and what is the purpose of doing so. Now each time I will use wikipedia I think I have developed the 'eye' to not just overview or simply read the article but to 'scan' through the information and catch any grammatical errors in there. If it wasn't for this extra credit assignment I would have just read and hopped onto the next webpage. But now if I see any error, thanks to my learnings from this, I am definitely going to correct that just as Professor Keefer said "that knowledge sharing, like karma, benefits both the sharer and receiver" [[1]] is the link of the article I copyedited. I made 2 corrections of a double spacing error in it and added a citation as well. Aashima99 (talk) 22:58, 2 April 2022 (UTC) Here is a link showing the differences I made.[[2]]

@Aashima99 Welcome to Wikipedia and glad you decided to work through this experience! You have a lot more information in here than was needed (more is often better than less!), and it seems this is primarily the assignment for Week 1. Current with Week 1. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:44, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 1, Week 2 & Week 3 for assigned article 2/ Aashima99

For the second article I chose [[3]]. I thought this will be a good insight for me as I am working on pay gap for my main assignment as well as it resonates with something I firmly believe in and want to know more about- How are women discriminated against in various forms and how do we empower them. Here is the link for the difference I made to the article on 'gender wage gap in India'[[4]], [[5]]. I also made a change in the first line by adding the word 'sector' and labor market 'in India' but that is not showing up in the link somehow. I learnt that it is extremely important to back up your claims(whatever you're making in your research) as if it is not done so, it could prove to be troublesome on a variety of levels. Besides, a research paper's job is to present concrete facts to the reader, and that should be done in the most responsible fashion. Aashima99 (talk) 02:51, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

@Aashima99 Nice edits. Current with Week 2. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:46, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 1, Week 2 & Week 3 for assigned article 3

I chose to revise an article on Gauri Khan, one of Bollywood's biggest superstar - Shah Rukh Khan's wife and one of the most famous celebrity in India. I corrected a few grammatical errors that were there in this article. This is the difference link [[6]] Aashima99 (talk) 02:44, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

@Aashima99 Week 3 involves adding a citation to an article. The copyedits you did to this article are fine, though can you add one per the guidance in the assignment and then ping me here? --- FULBERT (talk) 14:48, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 1/ Alitea10101

Hello everyone. This is Alice. I am looking forward to learn more about Wikipedia. 203.137.193.19 (talk) 00:54, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

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Week 2/ Alitea10101

In week 2, I learned that although wikipedia is considered one of the most useful source, it is still not perfect. I leanred how to assign myself an artcile and my article is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nasi_lemak. Nasi lemak is a traditional Malaysian dish which I really like. I fixed the grammar as a minor change. The difference is here: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Nasi_lemak&diff=prev&oldid=1080722477 Alitea10101 (talk) 01:30, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

@Alitea10101 Nice edits. Current with Week 2. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:55, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 3/Alitea10101

It is hard to find scholar reference for a food. But fortunately I used EBSCO to find a really good one. Although I could not generate the citatin automatically, I was able to manually add the citation. I feel so accomplished right now! This is the difference: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Nasi_lemak&diff=prev&oldid=1080731604 Alitea10101 (talk) 03:08, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

@Alitea10101 Nice citation added in this article. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 14:58, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 2 / Sut6777

Hello!

This week I made minor changes/edits to an existing article. I chose this article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bremen

I changed two words: "Länder" to "Bunseländer" and "president" to "mayor".

Here's the edit history page showing the before and after: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bremen&type=revision&diff=1080732085&oldid=1077395395

I learned how to make minor edits on existing articles and how to hyperlink articles. Sut6777 (talk) 03:26, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

@Sut6777 Nice edits, especially in correcting some use of language that a casual reader may not know. Current with Week 2. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:00, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 3/ Sut6777

Hi!

This week I added a sentence and a citation to an existing article. I chose this article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lloyd_Werft

I added a sentence about the bankruptcy of the company and added a citation.

Here's the edit history page showing the before and after: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Lloyd_Werft&type=revision&diff=1080734745&oldid=1067746896

I learned how to add citations to existing articles and how to use sandboxes for drafts of the edits I want to make to articles. Sut6777 (talk) 03:49, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

@Sut6777 Nice edits to this article. Current with Week 3. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:04, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

Week1/Rr3961

Hello, everyone! I am Rui Ren from MASY 1260 class and looking forward to learning more about Wikipedia. Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rr3961 (talk • contribs) 03:35, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

@Rr3961 You have not yet registered for the this assignment, which means I cannot track it through the system. Please follow the link through our course system and ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 15:07, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 2/Rr3961

There is the link to the article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Henan. Ichanged in Administrative divisions tab, The current data should be "By June 2021, the province has jurisdiction over 663 subdistricts, 1181 towns, 598 townships and 12 ethnic townships, with a total of 2,454 township level divisions".This taught me how to edit wikipedia articles. Here is view history link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Henan&action=history Rr3961 (talk) 04:11, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

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Week 3/Rr3961

This week, I learned how to add a quotation to an article. I made a edit to the article on https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/COVID-19_pandemic_in_mainland_China#cite_note-195. The added a cita was information about China's economy. Here is the link to the diff:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=COVID-19_recession&diff=1080741377&oldid=1080596813. Rr3961 (talk) 05:07, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

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Week 1/ SL8992 (talk) 03:59, 3 April 2022 (UTC)SL8992

Hello, everyone! I am Sitong from MASY 1260 class and I am looking forward to learning more about Wikipedia!

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Week 3/ SL8992

I added a reference for the article!

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Houston_Rockets

SL8992 Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. Additionally, please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:10, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 2/ SL8992

I have updated the coach list of Houston Rockets https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Houston_Rockets

Here is the link of differences: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Houston_Rockets&type=revision&diff=1080736920&oldid=1076176742 — Preceding unsigned comment added by SL8992 (talk • contribs) 04:08, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

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Week 4 / NeverlandAriana

Hi professor, this week I work on the article Happy Together, which is also a film. I find there is a paragraph under the Legacy category that talks about a director called James Laxton, his work was inspired by this film. There miss a reference to support this statement. I add a news article in Time as a citation and add some words to improve it. Here is the diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Happy_Together_%281997_film%29&type=revision&diff=1080709590&oldid=1079634115--NeverlandAriana (talk) 23:28, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

NeverlandAriana, Nice edit and citation. Current with Week 4. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:47, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

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Paddle ball is a one-person game played with a paddle and an attached ball.
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Week 4/ Bettyhwt

Hello, Professor. For week 4, I chose Groundwater pollutionn as the topic. Here is the diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Groundwater_pollution&type=revision&diff=1080781707&oldid=1080525712 The reason I chose this topic is I read an article posted American Indians protested against oil pipelines going through their nature reserves because of the groundwater pollution. So, I want to know more about how seriously groundwater pollution is caused by human factors.--Bettyhwt (talk) 12:23, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

Bettyhwt, Citations alone generally do not add value. Beyond adding a citation alone, make sure to provide a sentence or two within the article itself to express your contribution in context (which the citation will support). This will demonstrate how your addition adds to the overall knowledge in the article. Please add a sentence or two to the article you edited and then ping me here when done. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:15, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT hello, professor. I just revised this Groundwater pollution wikipedia article. I added a water pollution example of a town in Tanzania, Africa and detailed explained the situation. Here is the diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Groundwater_pollution&type=revision&diff=1081094552&oldid=1080781707--- Bettyhwt (talk) 08:32, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
Bettyhwt, Nice edits. Current with Week 4. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:11, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 4 / Sut6777

Hi!

This week I added information and a citation to an existing article. I chose this article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gigafactory_Berlin-Brandenburg

I added information on how Tesla's Gigafactory in Berlin is its first manufacturing location in Europe, which was a missing detail in the article.

Here's the edit history page showing the before and after: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Gigafactory_Berlin-Brandenburg&type=revision&diff=1081026298&oldid=1080785943

This week I learned about finding sources and editing articles, and how these vary depending on topics. Sut6777 (talk) 21:23, 4 April 2022 (UTC)

Sut6777, Nice edit, and one of the few places where a company's own websites can objectively be used as its own source. Current with Week . --- FULBERT (talk) 22:15, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 5 / Sut6777

Hi!

For this week I chose to update and edit an article about a race car driver who recently won the Daytona 24 hour race. The link to the page is here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Devlin_DeFrancesco

The article had outdated information about his best Daytona 24 race performance, stating that his 5th place finish in 2019 was his best performance, hence I deleted that information and added that he won the 60th running of Daytona 24 in January 2022. The citation I used for this edit is an NBC Sports article listing all the winners of the different race categories of the 2022 Rolex 24 race.

The link to the diff page is here: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Devlin_DeFrancesco&type=revision&diff=1081041927&oldid=1078268095

In this process, I learned that besides adding information to articles it is also important to read the full article and correct any outdated information. Sut6777 (talk) 23:47, 4 April 2022 (UTC)

Sut6777, Nice edit here with Week 5. Current. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:16, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 5 / NeverlandAriana

Hi professor, this week I edit the article A Chinese Ghost Story. I notice there is a “citation needed” in the introduction part, I type some keywords and find a journal article that matches this citation need. The article talks about Hong Kong films, and the relationship between comedy films and cult films, taking A Chinese Ghost Story as an example.

I also add some words, try to make the description more specific and accurate, such as a restored version of this film was released in 2011 in mainland China. I find it's much fun to work on films topic articles and make contributions to my interesting topic. The diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=A_Chinese_Ghost_Story&type=revision&diff=1081203268&oldid=1080265990--NeverlandAriana (talk) 23:19, 5 April 2022 (UTC)

NeverlandAriana, Nice edit on this article. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 22:19, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 5 | Bac8980

Hello!

For week 5, I decided to work on the Recruitment wiki page. I added information to support that recruitment via the internet is an effective strategy and cheap. I used a peer-reviewed article to support the claims made. Here is a link to the [[7]] page. This was an article I used for my paper so I thought it would be super relevant to add especially since we're an internet-driven generation.

Bac8980 (talk) 03:22, 6 April 2022 (UTC)

Bac8980, Nice edits. Current with Week 5. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:20, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 4 / Vermi1ion

For week 4, I chose the article Supply chain sustainability. I added a couple sentences from a 2017 study and linked the citation. Here is a link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Supply_chain_sustainability&type=revision&diff=1081328431&oldid=1075697083

This week I chose to find an article closer to my research proposal topic so that the work in my extra credit will further support my class work. --Vermi1ion (talk) 19:55, 6 April 2022 (UTC)

Vermi1ion, Nice addition to this article. Week 4 is current. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:21, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 4 / YC5039

Hello, for week 4, I assigned myself Shenzhen to edit. Shenzhen is my hometown and this assignment allowed me to learn more about my hometown, such as its history. Thus, I added a citation about its history. Here is the link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Shenzhen&type=revision&diff=1081336487&oldid=1080589612. YC5039 (talk) 21:06, 6 April 2022 (UTC)

YC5039, Nice addition to the article and ongoing learning about our communities. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 22:23, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 4/ DDDANII

For this week, I worked on the article under the area of film https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Parasite_(2019_film). In the themes and interpretations category, I think it will be better to add what the movie reveals between different social groups. Therefore, I added some words to improve it with a reference cited. And here is the diff link https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Parasite_%282019_film%29&type=revision&diff=1080917138&oldid=1078776682.--DDDANII (talk) 07:13, 4 April 2022 (UTC)

DDDANII, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:13, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
FULBERT Assigned. --DDDANII (talk) 12:23, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
@DDDANII Nice edits. Current with Week 4. --- FULBERT (talk) 20:40, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

Week5/Tracy77tt

Hello, this is the link to new editing for week 5 customer engagement . I added the definition of customer engagement from one high-quality article. Here is the diff link https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.phptitle=Customer_engagement&type=revision&diff=1081053127&oldid=1078408677. From the editing process, I can not only learn from reading the articles on Wiki but also gain ideas from other high-quality journal articles. I think this process can help me explore more opinions with those articles. --Tracy77tt (talk) 01:23, 5 April 2022 (UTC)

Tracy77tt, The link to the diff does not work; can you please reply here with a revision for it and then I will check? --- FULBERT (talk) 22:18, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT Sure, please check this link https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Customer_engagement&type=revision&diff=1081053127&oldid=1078408677 --Tracy77tt (talk) 23:00, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
@Tracy77tt Nice reply to me and nice edits overall. Current with Week 5. --- FULBERT (talk) 20:41, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 4 - Tianhao Ning

Dear professor, for week 4, I assign myself a new article, The lion king.

And I noticing that under the "stage adaptation" section, there could be more details to add in. since The lion king tells a story based on African culture background, and to celebrate it, the broadway show specifically claim that there will be six African languages sung or spoke in the show. And the original Wiki page did not mention that. I think it will be helpful. So I added this detail into the section, and also cited the sentence I added.

Here is the diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=The_Lion_King&type=revision&diff=1081527776&oldid=1080811779

Thank you !Tianhao Ning (talk) 00:18, 8 April 2022 (UTC)

Tianhao Ning, Nice edits. Current with Week 4. --- FULBERT (talk) 20:47, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 4 / Bunnyw0123

I assigned myself the article about Finance https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Finance this week. I've added a citation to the behavioral finance section because it's important to investors. I hope that investors can get more information while browsing this article. Here is the link to the difference https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Finance&diff=1081614541&oldid=1081389594. --Bunnyw0123 (talk) 15:03, 8 April 2022 (UTC)

@Bunnyw0123 Nice edits. Current with Week 4. --- FULBERT (talk) 20:50, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 5 / Bunnyw0123

I added a citation to the Islamic Countries section of Mortgage loan https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mortgage_loan. When I searched for journal articles for my proposal paper, I found many articles related to the Islamic economy. I had just heard that it is an independent economic system before, and now I learned more about the Islamic economy by contributing to the Wikipedia article. Here is the link to the difference https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Mortgage_loan&diff=1081625034&oldid=1065156145. --Bunnyw0123 (talk) 16:14, 8 April 2022 (UTC)

Bunnyw0123, Nice edit on this article. Current with Week 5. --- FULBERT (talk) 20:51, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

Week3- Adding a citation/ Aashima99

For week 3, I added a citation to the assigned article 2 based on gender pay gap in India. Here is the link to the changes [[8]]. Hope that makes sense and is relevant. Aashima99 (talk) 21:24, 8 April 2022 (UTC)

Aashima99, Nice edits. Current with Week 3. --- FULBERT (talk) 20:55, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

Week4/ Aashim99

For week 4's assignment I chose to edit an article on academy awards- the most in-trend topic after Will Smith publicly thrashed Chris Rock. At a certain point in the article, there was a claim made that oscars' all white nominee list reflects bias and lack of diversity. No matter how true your claim is, you need to have it backed up by evidence. That is the one thing that I have learnt in this class after almost 5 weekly assignments! I kept making claims in my paper based on gender gap, passionately, forgetting that for academic research purposes, I need to have supporting evidence. Nevertheless, I learnt my lesson and so executed it for week 4! [[9]] Aashima99 (talk) 03:15, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

Aashima99, Citations alone generally do not add value. Beyond adding a citation alone, make sure to provide a sentence or two within the article itself to express your contribution in context (which the citation will support). This will demonstrate how your addition adds to the overall knowledge in the article. Please add a sentence or two to the article you edited and then ping me here when done. --- FULBERT (talk) 20:57, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

week 5/ Aashima99

I worked on the 'employment discrimination' article, which is a broader area comprising of the issue of gender pay gap and the main soil from which the issue stems from. I made a few copyedits as I was going through the article, and added 2 citations to it which I used in my paper too. Co-incidentally, as I was reading the wiki article, a few of the things written in there immediately registered in my mind as the same things that I did research on for my paper so it was not hard for me to find understand or identify where more citations can be added. here is the link [[10]] Aashima99 (talk) 03:39, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

@Aashima99 Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week and I will take a look at it and reply. Citations alone generally do not add value. Beyond adding a citation alone, make sure to provide a sentence or two within the article itself to express your contribution in context (which the citation will support). This will demonstrate how your addition adds to the overall knowledge in the article. Please add a sentence or two to the article you edited and then ping me here when done. --- FULBERT (talk) 21:02, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

Week4 / Garry10086

On week4 I added more background information in the wikipedia site of the film " Ashes of time". The diff/ his link is :https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ashes_of_Time&diff=prev&oldid=1081718851. I refer to this director's biography, A Companion to Wong Kar‐wai, which doi is: http://:doi.org/10.1002/9781118425589. In the third section of the book there is talk about early Wuxia films The influence of Wong Kar-wai in the creation of Ashes of time. I'm very happy to be involved in the wiki editing of my favorite movie.--Garrygan10086 (talk) 06:26, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

Garrygan10086, Nice edits. Current with Week 4. --- FULBERT (talk) 21:03, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 5/ DDDANII

Hi professor, this week I chose to work on the https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/IKEA article. There is the diff link https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=IKEA&type=revision&diff=1081724899&oldid=1081308503. I really enjoy the editing process as I can utilize the knowledge to contribute on WIKI pages. I researched on IKEA for one of my class project. The logistics issues during COVID-19 pandemic really hit hard from people to organizations. --DDDANII (talk) 07:33, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

DDDANII, Nice edits. Current with Week 5. --- FULBERT (talk) 21:05, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 4 / Nuts666

Hi, in week 4, I assigned the article about a great person called Jay Chou. He is one of the most popular singers and actors in China. I added a little detail and a reference to his music style. Here is the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jay_Chou&type=revision&diff=1081730880&oldid=1080850690 During this week, I found that some of the descriptions on Wikipedia are not very comprehensive, and some details need to be revised.Nuts666 (talk) 08:56, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

Nuts666, Nice edits to this article, something I even learned a bit about. Current with Week 4. --- FULBERT (talk) 21:06, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

Week 4/Alitea10101

Hey Professor, so for this week, I added a new citation to the previous article I assigned to myself https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nasi_lemak. The difference is here https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Nasi_lemak&diff=prev&oldid=1081776438. I find it very fascinating that although Nasi Lemak is considered a national dish in Malaysia, there are still a lot miss understanding and arguments over it. Furthermore, the Wikipedia page is very simple and adding extra citations is necessary. I truly enjoyed this journey.Alitea10101 (talk) 16:18, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

Alitea10101, Nice edit, though please note -- do not sign article edits themselves. Only sign or link to your own page on a Talk page. Another editor already removed it from this edit, so please avoid that in future edits. Current with Week 4. --- FULBERT (talk) 21:08, 9 April 2022 (UTC)
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