User talk:Isabella3501/sandbox

Feedback

@Isabella3501, Mig0423, NirmPatel, and Petar$10: Nice start on your draft. Some feedback

• References should appear immediately after the statements they support. There should be a minimum of one reference per paragraph, and there shouldn’t be any text after the last reference in a paragraph. The first paragraph of your "role in pain regulation" section, for example, is entirely unsourced.
• Lists are most useful as reminders for people who already know what's going on. Your "blockers" section has little information for the average reader - it doesn't explain what a blocker is, it doesn't link to an article that someone could click through to learn more, and it doesn't explain anything about these list items. It's also unsourced.
• Section headers use sentence capitalization, not title capitalization; only the first word of the title, and proper nouns, should be capitalized. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:21, 6 April 2018 (UTC)