Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was promoted 16:19, 3 August 2007.

Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories[edit]

Like the promoted Kingdom Hearts, the article got recent improvement from some dedicated editors. A current GA, it's well-written and referenced, and seems good enough to reach FA status. igordebraga ≠ 15:48, 17 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I have added a hidden message telling other users not to add unnecessary information, like the Kingdom Hearts article. The message reads:

This section has been edited to comply with the featured article criteria. Please do not add any unnecessary information. If you do wish to add detail on certain events, please discuss the additions on the talk page first or direct your proposed addition to a more detailed subarticle that pertains to the topic at hand. Example: If you wish to add detail on the finer plot details, follow the links to that article and insert the detail there or discuss it on the talk page. Any unneeded info added to this plot will be quickly reverted, including any addition of spoiler tags. This plot is meant to be as comprehensive as possible, while only containing the details needed to understand plot at its most basic level.

This should stop many other users in doing so. I think this article is an FA potential. One of the best game articles and certainly one of the best of Wikipedia IMHO. Greg Jones II 01:35, 18 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Support - As a small contributor to this article, I have observed it for a while and seen it grow dramatically in size and quality. I believe it's FA quality. Judgesurreal777 00:35, 23 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Co-nom and support, I have finished my copyedit and I think it's ready. Axem Titanium 00:01, 24 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Support It's OK Green Owl ^Uh ^uh
Oppose These fixes needed: All fixed. Epbr123 11:11, 2 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Y "they forgot all of their abilities" – the "of" is redundant
Y "In order to explain the loss" – the "in order" is redundant
Y Em dashes should be unspaced
Y"Among the four are;" – the ";" is unnecessary
Y Some full dates are linked, while others aren't. This should be consistant.
Y IMDb isn't a reliable source as anyone can edit it.
Y The biography of Utada Hikaru at LyricsFreak.com is from Wikipedia, and therefore can't be used as a source [1]
YThe Dengekionline.com source is missing a language tag
YReferences don't need to be indicated when they're in English
YAccording to Wikipedia:Manual of Style#Images, it is recommended not to specify the size of images. The sizes should be what readers have specified in their user preferences. Epbr123 09:03, 2 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Y I've fixed all these issues. Kariteh 10:00, 2 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Support Well-written, comprehensive, well-referenced, and all issues mentioned above have been fully fixed. Kariteh 10:00, 2 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.