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Sundew[edit]

This article is an extensive work based mainly on a translation of the parallel German article, which has received Excellent Article status on the German Wikipedia. The article has undergone peer review (see archive) and appropriate changes were made, although unfortunately only one user submitted comments. Self-nominate and Support. NoahElhardt 04:52, 4 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

  • Object Needs more inline references. --Peter Andersen 09:43, 5 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • Object There is not enough inline references. Also, certain sections are very small. These should be either expanded or blended in with other sections. -- Underneath-it-All 17:43, 5 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
    • The reason the article is a little scant on inline citations is because it is mainly a translation of the German article. Apparently the German Wikipedia uses inline citations mainly for quotations. I have requested most of the missing inline citations from the German author, so those should be added soon.
      • I've upped the number of citations to 27, and still have a few more coming (I'll have to root through species descriptions for these). --NoahElhardt 20:30, 8 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
    • Any suggestions on how to blend the smaller paragraphs into others? It is hard, for example, to blend a section on "Roots" with a section on "Flowers". I agree with you in theory, but am having trouble applying the theory in this case. Thanks --NoahElhardt 21:39, 5 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
      • The reproduction and flower sections could be merged for a start since they are totally linked.--Peta 07:29, 7 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
        • I'll see what I can do, although those two sections, while related, are different types of sections. In an article about humans, one wouldn't merge a section on "Mouth" with a section on "Language", even though they are "totally linked". --NoahElhardt 15:48, 8 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • Object - needs expansion - --GoOdCoNtEnT 06:46, 8 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
    • What sections, subject matters do you think could use expansion? In other words, what kind of information is missing that you would like to see added? --NoahElhardt 15:48, 8 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
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