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The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was not promoted by SandyGeorgia 16:45, 10 July 2011 [1].

The Elder Scrolls IV: Oblivion[edit]

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Nominator(s): SCB '92 (talk) 18:10, 8 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured article because...the article looks complete; this is currently an A-class, but I think it is good enough to be a featured article SCB '92 (talk) 18:10, 8 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Sequel section is unsourced.
  • There is a [citation needed] in Gameplay section.
  • Reception section needs to be expanded, as per previous FAC, it talks about it being great, about voice, music, but lacks fundamental features, such as, gameplay (e.g. combat), story, graphics.
  • Isn't Plot section a little too long? Surely all the details there are not essential? —  HELLKNOWZ  ▎TALK 18:38, 8 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Source review - spotchecks not done. Nikkimaria (talk) 19:14, 8 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • "to create NPCs who could engage in complex activity—such as travelling from town to town every few days or going to church on a certain day—without the chance of execution error." - source?
  • "In response to the new content, the ESRB conducted a new review of Oblivion, showing to its reviewers the content originally submitted by Bethesda along with the newly disclosed content." - source?
  • "Bethesda Softworks announced in 2010 that they have been developing and will release the next installment of The Elder Scrolls in 2011." - source? Look for other statements requiring sourcing
  • Web citations need retrieval dates
  • Ref 58, 60: publisher? Check for others
  • Ref 73: formatting
  • What is AIAS, and why is it bolded?
  • Why include the wiki in External links
  • See here for a list of potentially problematic links
  • What makes this a high-quality reliable source? This? This? This? Nikkimaria (talk) 19:14, 8 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Strong Oppose and Withdraw - I have seen the history of the article and the nominator has only made one edit to the article. GamerPro64 22:28, 8 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Image Review I resized some stuff, other than that, it's good on images. Sven Manguard Wha? 03:52, 9 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]


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