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The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was promoted by Karanacs 18:43, 16 February 2010 [1].

Theoren Fleury[edit]

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Nominator(s): Resolute 02:51, 11 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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Well, lets try this again. I previously nominated this article six weeks ago, but it did not pass due to a lack of reviewers. Fleury is one of the more newsworthy and controversial figures in recent hockey history, and I think one of the more entertaining sports personalities, both on and off the field of play. As there were no outstanding issues when that nomination, I have not made any real changes, but do look forward to all new feedback. Cheers! Resolute 02:51, 11 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Note: This is a WikiCup nomination. To the nominator: if you do not intend to submit this article at the WikiCup, feel free to remove this notice. Ucucha 02:53, 11 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comments. No dab links, alt text present and good. One dead external link, to Fleary's Concrete: [2]. Ucucha 02:55, 11 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • lol. I was actually wondering when that link would go dead. I simply removed it as there was a second reference to support the statement. Resolute 02:58, 11 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thanks. Yes, from the article text I could understand why the link would go dead. :) Ucucha 03:02, 11 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support carried over from last time. I think it's ready. I'll also note that the images and sources were reviewed in the last FAC, with no outstanding issues. --Andy Walsh (talk) 03:36, 11 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Err, ok. Near as I can tell, most of these errors are the result of terrible formatting on the {{Citation}} template itself, but I'll see what I can do. Resolute 15:05, 11 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]
    • Yes, I think most of them can be fixed with an empty |ref= parameter for {{citation}}. Eubulides (talk) 20:55, 11 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]
      • That did it, thanks. Should be clean now. Resolute 23:47, 11 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Image check: 3 images, all CC-by-SA from Commons with the author (Resolute) listed. All non-infobox images have good captions. --PresN 17:59, 11 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support: I provided an informal peer review of this article a couple of months ago; it was in good shape then, and it's in better shape now. Two minor issues:
  • The lead claims that he was at times the smallest player in the NHL, but that's neither cited in the lead nor repeated in the body.
  • "Described as the "most talented" player ever to play in Great Britain..." Not to be a pedant, but Belfast isn't in Great Britain (though I imagine the Giants played some road games there). Steve Smith (talk) 20:16, 12 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Modified both, should be fine now. Thanks! Resolute 22:06, 12 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support well done, an interesting read, meets FA standards Dincher (talk) 21:59, 13 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support – Reviewed this article at the first FAC and thought it deserved to be promoted then. I see nothing that would cause me to change my opinion now. Giants2008 (27 and counting) 03:16, 16 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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