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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 15 March 2019 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of awards and nominations received by Dua Lipa[edit]

List of awards and nominations received by Dua Lipa (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): Rodrigo1198 and NØ 17:38, 30 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Rodrigo1198 and I are nominating this for featured list because we have collaborated on it and have concluded that it meets the featured list criteria. I've already effected all the feedback I got on my last FLC here, so this is pretty much ready. All input is welcome and appreciated!--NØ 17:38, 30 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Lirim.Z

  • Dua Lipa is an English singer and songwriter who has won 26 awards from 103 nominations. I would change this sentence to something like English singer and songwriter Dua Lipa has won 26 awards from 103 nominations. I would also suggest that you use a note that, which says something like As of 30 January 2019.
  • The lead is a little bit thin.
  • Ref 19: Ministry of Foreign Affairs of Kosovo
  • Ref 12, 13, 22, 28, 44, 47, 50, 55: |language=
  • --Lirim | Talk 20:37, 30 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Lirim.Z, thanks a lot for the comments! I made the changes. As for the lead I've kept it a bit shorter on purpose since Lipa is a new artist with just one album and the list is bound to grow. I'd be open to adding any other accolades you think are worthy of being in the lead though.--NØ 21:39, 30 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Support --Lirim | Talk 21:58, 30 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • "released her selftitled debut album" => "released her self-titled debut album"
  • "Her song, "New Rules" " - no need for that comma
  • "The song managed to win " => "The song won"
  • Stray space between the full stop and the ref at the end of the lead
  • Why is the "Sound of..." entry in with the Bs?
  • Conversely, "The Beano Awards" probably should be with the Bs
  • "Organizations without a Wikipedia page are not included in list of accolades." - as she is British, you should use the correct UK spelling of "organisation" ;-)

HTH -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 21:11, 30 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks a lot for the comments! Done, ChrisTheDude. :D--NØ 21:41, 30 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I dropped the image size to 220px and made the caption small, BeatlesLedTV. Feel free to suggest any more changes!--NØ 05:14, 31 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Still seems a little big to me, but maybe it's just me
  • Ref(s) → Ref.
  • Feel the grammy sentence in lead should be referenced
That's all I got otherwise. BeatlesLedTV (talk) 21:04, 31 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Done. I've gone with 200px for the lead image because thats what I did for my last two FLs but am open to dropping it to a specific size if you suggest one.--NØ 15:39, 1 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Support from Aoba47
  • Do you think the nominations for “One Kiss” should be addressed in the lead? There appear to be eleven nominations according to the table. Right now, the lead only mentions the awards for the songs “New Rules” and “Electricty”. The same question applies to “IDGAF”.
  • I would specify in the lead that “Electricity” is a collaboration with Silk City.
  • For Reference 12, “Vote Now” should not be in all caps.

Everything looks good. The above comments are relatively minor, and once they are addressed, I will be more than happy to support it for promotion. If you have the time, I would greatly appreciate any feedback on my current FAC. Either way, it was an interesting read. Just remember to keep it updated. Aoba47 (talk) 20:56, 3 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Glad to see you around, Aoba47! The lead actually looks much better with the IDGAF and OK nominations added, thanks for that suggestion. I'll definitely take a look at your FAC when I have more time. I already glanced a bit through that article and it looked great.--NØ 21:37, 3 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • I support this, and thank you for addressing everything. I have somewhat lost track of current popular music so it is nice to read about a somewhat new-ish singer. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend so far. Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 3 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remember to update the lead and award count after the Grammy wins. Aoba47 (talk) 15:55, 11 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Drive-by comment What's with the note saying that organisations without a Wikipedia page aren't included in the list? I don't think I've ever seen that in a featured list before; it looks rather out of place. Have any other articles been promoted to FL with notes like that? Thanks, A Thousand Doors (talk | contribs) 16:00, 7 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • @A Thousand Doors: I have seen some lists with it and some without it. I think that some lists include it if the subject has won awards outside of those discussed on Wikipedia, as a way to hopefully prevent those awards from being added if that makes sense. Aoba47 (talk) 20:11, 15 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Just wanted to update everyone that MaranoFan is on a script-enforced wikibreak. Aoba47 (talk) 20:11, 15 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    • Have any of these lists been promoted to FL status? If they have then I'll leave it, but it does seem really odd to me to have what is essentially an editing notice in the middle of the article. Usually they'd be hidden comments within the source code. A Thousand Doors (talk | contribs) 16:39, 18 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
      • @A Thousand Doors: I have seen a few awards list promoted to FL status with the note, and others without it. It is rather inconsistent for some reason. Here is one example (List of awards and nominations received by Matthew McConaughey) of a FL with a similar note (i.e. note C in the infobox). Maybe, some day in the future, there can be a discussion and a consensus on it. I always forget about hidden comments/notes, but that would make sense in this context (at least to me). Aoba47 (talk) 19:07, 18 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • Her article refers to her as a singer-songwriter, why not use that terminology here?
  • Probably worth some introductory notes about her style, when she started etc, to put some context around this.
  • "Her song "New Rules" earned ..." from the eponymous album.
  • Last lead para is pretty awful, re-write needed so we don't see quick repeats of each of the three ceremonies.
  • Where are the pending awards noted in either the lead, the totals or the infobox? Presumably since they're pending, they already count as nominations?
  • Table and infobox have some discrepencies:
    • ASCAP Pop Music Awards vs ASCAP Awards.
    • Bambi Awards is linked to two different targets, albeit a redirect.
    • Ditto BBC Teen Awards.
    • The Beano Awards aren't in the infobox in the same order.
    • Echo Awards are piped to two different things, one a redirect.
    • European Border Breakers Awards is linked to two different targets, albeit a redirect.
    • "Gaygalan" has no English Wikipedia page so I'm surprised by its inclusion.
    • Likewise the SCTV Awards.
    • GQ Men of the Year Awards is linked to both just GQ and the section in GQ's article dealing with this award. And shouldn't GQ be italicised?
    • Popjustice - table has one nomination, infobox has two. Probably therefore worth double-checking all the totals add up properly.
    • "Sound of..." doesn't appear in the infobox.
    • Swedish Gaffa Awards is linked differently. And shouldn't Gaffa be italicised?
    • "Choice Female Artist" is piped to a redirect.
  • Since the table is sortable, all linked items should be linked every time since once re-ordered, no way of guaranteeing the linked item appears first.
  • If you're doing the rowspan thing, shouldn't Herself be spanned across ASCAP and Bambi? And Glamour and Global? Probably worth checking all others for consistency.

That's probably enough for a first pass. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:00, 17 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for listing these concerns. As was noted above, I (MaranoFan) am on a script-enforced WikiBreak due to examinations. It would be greatly appreciated if someone could get to these concerns in a timely manner, maybe Aoba47 if he has the time. It would be a shame to see this FLC fail after the overwhelming support. Thanks a lot in advance.—2401:4900:1984:15C7:DD24:D399:82C:57FD (talk) 14:02, 18 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Unfortunately, I do not have the time to take this on. Aoba47 (talk) 14:35, 18 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Then I guess this will need to be closed. I'll leave it a week and then archive it if no action is taken. The Rambling Man (talk) 22:21, 27 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
It seems that MaranoFan's wikibreak will be done tomorrow (at least according to the script) so they may come back to address your comments then. Aoba47 (talk) 21:14, 1 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
If MaranoFan doesn't return in a timely fashion, I'm happy to help out (don't know if that would invalidate my support)..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:23, 2 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks to ChrisTheDude for volunteering to fix the list in my absence. The Rambling Man, I think I addressed all your concerns. Instead of overlinking the song names every time I just sorted the table according to every column and linked the first mentions. Do let me know if there's anything more that needs to be done.--NØ 10:53, 2 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

It's not overlinking, in a sortable table every linkable item should be linked every time. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:56, 2 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Done, The Rambling Man.--NØ 11:08, 2 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@MaranoFan:, you all sorted now.....? -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:24, 2 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, my examinations ended today!:D--NØ 18:38, 2 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; tweaked one sort and 2 links; promoting. --PresN 16:21, 14 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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