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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:32, 4 April 2017 (UTC) [1].[reply]

Peter Dinklage on screen and stage[edit]

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Nominator(s): AffeL (talk) 14:17, 15 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I believe it meets the criteria and I have also adressed all comments by the previous failed FL nomination. - AffeL (talk) 14:17, 15 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 19:35, 29 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • "a Screen Actors Guild Award nominations" lose the s.
  • "one of the highest paid actor on television " use that s here for actors.

Otherwise I see no major issues. The Rambling Man (talk) 11:55, 25 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

All done - AffeL (talk) 12:48, 25 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from DarthBotto
Comments from DarthBotto
  • I would add a comma after "...the British film Death at a Funeral (2007)".
    • This punctuation fits in with the apparent serial comma syntax of the article.
  • I was going to recommend adding the mention of Nolan North replacing him in the role of Ghost, but I see that it is in hand in the content, so it's not unnecessary in the lead.
  • The referencing in this article is strong and reliable.
  • I would say that any adjustments made, like my recommended punctuation, are minimal. If you take care of that little detail, you'll definitely have my support vote. Beyond that, if you would like to weigh in at Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Alien characters/archive1, it would be greatly appreciated! DARTHBOTTO talk•cont 19:59, 21 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@DarthBotto: All done. - AffeL (talk) 21:21, 21 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Wonderful! With that, you have my support!
Comments from Aoba47
  • I am not sure if the second image in the "Television" section is entirely necessary as it does not illustrate anything new from the top image.
  • Shouldn't the key in the "Film" section be at the top of the section to be really helpful to a reader?
  • I do not quite understand why his roles as a narrator for television documentaries is noteworthy enough for its own section and table. Couldn't this easily be put in the table in the "Television" section?

@AffeL: Great work with the list. Once my comments are addressed, I will support this nomination. Aoba47 (talk) 14:58, 28 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Aoba47: All done. I removed the first image and put the second as the top image. - AffeL (talk) 15:11, 28 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Support: Thank you for your prompt responses, and great work with this list! I can definitely support this nomination. If possible, could you look at my FLC as well? I understand that it is a busy time so I understand if you do not have the time or energy to do so. Either way, good luck with getting this promoted! Aoba47 (talk) 15:54, 28 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Cowlibob (talk) 17:32, 2 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
*If The Station Agent was his breakthrough, it would be interesting to mention what role/character he played.
Done - AffeL (talk) 13:34, 1 April 2017 (UTC) [reply]
That's copied straight from the film article. Any way of rephrasing it? Cowlibob (talk) 13:38, 2 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Could also mention that he received a nomination for an Independent Spirit award for the role.
Done - AffeL (talk) 13:34, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • "He gained international recognition with the HBO series Game of Thrones, in which he portrays Tyrion Lannister, a role he has been playing since 2011" Could be rephrased as "In the same year, he gained international recognition with the HBO fantasy drama series Game of Thrones for his portrayal of Tyrion Lannister". As of 2016, Dinklage has received consecutive Primetime Emmy nominations from 2011 to 2016 including two wins for the role as well as one Golden Globe Award.
Done - AffeL (talk) 13:34, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Dinklage provided the voice of Captain Gutt in the 2012 computer-animated comedy Ice Age: Continental Drift,[12] which earned over $877 million to become his highest-grossing release" rephrased as "Dinklage provided the voice of Captain Gutt in the 2012 computer-animated comedy Ice Age: Continental Drift,[12] which earned over $877 million-his highest grossing release as of 2016."
Done - AffeL (talk) 13:34, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Could mention that he was replaced because of a poor response to his voice acting in Destiny?
We don't know if that was the reason he got replaced. - AffeL (talk) 13:34, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
True, though the note in the video games table is incorrect as with the update Destiny 2.0, all of Ghost's lines were retroactively taken over by Nolan North not just the expansion "The Taken King". [[2]] Cowlibob (talk) 13:38, 2 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
I changed it to "Replaced by Nolan Northin in 2015". - AffeL (talk) 16:48, 2 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • We don't tend to mention future roles in the lead, leave that for the main article.
Removed - AffeL (talk) 13:34, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • It's stated in the lead that he has starred in numerous stage productions but only sentence is devoted to it despite the article being called "on screen and stage". Is there any more information on his stage roles, did he receive critical acclaim, were the shows commercially successful?
Can't find much information, but the A Month in the Country play he did recived mixed to positive reviews. - AffeL (talk) 13:34, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
I'll see if I can find something to work the stage section into the lead. Cowlibob (talk) 13:38, 2 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • The Mighty Eagle should sort under M
Done - AffeL (talk) 13:34, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Anthony Russo and Joe Russo's articles both link to the same one. Just replace them with Russo brothers
Done - AffeL (talk) 13:34, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Television table: Year -->Year(s), 2005-06 --> 2005-2006
Done - AffeL (talk) 13:34, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Video games table: Year --> Year(s), 2014-15 --> 2014-2015
Done - AffeL (talk) 13:34, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Need better reference than superherohype.com (ref 14)
Changed source - AffeL (talk) 13:34, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Need replacement reference for Terapeak (ref 24)
Changed source - AffeL (talk) 13:34, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 23 is a self-published book so not reliable, please replace
Fixed - AffeL (talk) 13:34, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 27 violated WP:SHOUT and is also not formatted correctly. work=The New York Times, also needs ndashes
Done - AffeL (talk) 13:34, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 34 should be Northern Ontario Business
Fixed - AffeL (talk) 13:34, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 41 is also self published so not reliable, please replace
Replaced - AffeL (talk) 13:34, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 45 46, 60 could be replaced by better references than Cinemablend
Fixed - AffeL (talk) 13:41, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 54 is unreliable (The Daily Mail), please replace
Replaced - AffeL (talk) 13:41, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 65 appears to be copyright violating YouTube video
Did not find any better source. So I removed it. - AffeL (talk) 14:08, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 66 is a commercial link to Amazon which we avoid at Wikipedia
Did not find any reliable sources. So I removed it. - AffeL (talk) 14:08, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 67, 74 (Futon Critic) is not a reliable source, please replace
Done - AffeL (talk) 14:03, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 68 (Looper) is not reliable, please replace
Done - AffeL (talk) 14:03, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 80 (Failoobmennikmania3.wixsite.com) is not a reliable source, please replace.
Can't find any reliable sources. So I removed it. - AffeL (talk) 14:08, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Can replace the Behind the Voice reference with a stronger reference.
Done - AffeL (talk) 14:03, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Cowlibob (talk) 12:22, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Cowlibob: I have addressed all your comments. Thanks for the review. - AffeL (talk) 14:09, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Support Good list. I haven't checked the references thoroughly which will hopefully be done in the source review. Cowlibob (talk) 17:32, 2 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Source review
  • Passed, no concerns. Closing as promoted. --PresN 17:43, 3 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through.
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