Wikipedia:Peer review/Star Wars Episode I: The Phantom Menace/archive1
Star Wars Episode I: The Phantom Menace[edit]
I'm planning on submitting this article for FA to finish out the prequel trilogy articles, so I would like suggestions concerning FA candidacy. :) The Filmaker 03:59, 25 July 2006 (UTC)
- The passages discussing the film's title seem too OR and aren't sourced. I would suggest trimming that part a little. The Wookieepedian 23:07, 25 July 2006 (UTC)
- The reference at the end of the paragraph was meant to overlord the entire paragraph, I've now trimmed the paragraph and spread the citation around. The Filmaker 00:10, 27 July 2006 (UTC)
- Looks good! :) The Wookieepedian 00:24, 27 July 2006 (UTC)
- The reference at the end of the paragraph was meant to overlord the entire paragraph, I've now trimmed the paragraph and spread the citation around. The Filmaker 00:10, 27 July 2006 (UTC)
- Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 01:44, 26 July 2006 (UTC)
- I have addressed all of the concerns that I could see. :) The Filmaker 00:38, 27 July 2006 (UTC)