Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2010 December 29
User since 2007. Have edited articles. This is the first I've authored. Finally figured out how to move it and post it. Need feedback/approval I guess?
You start your article with "Antje Paarlberg Chicago...". You should extend and make the first complete sentence "Antje Paarlberg is a character..." or whatever. Then the second sentence should be "Chicago area author Edna Ferber..." What I am saying is don't leave the beginning as it is now.
Jamalaka (talk) 00:12, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
Thank you! I have made the edit you suggested. As a newbie I wasn't thinking of the bold as anything but a heading. It is now part of the first sentence. Jamalaka (talk) 13:27, 29 December 2010 (UTC)jamalaka
Can someone approve my article? Jamalaka (talk) 15:41, 29 December 2010 (UTC)jamalaka
This is working progress of a DJ Presenter John-Paul Glover. Links will be added over the coming weeks.
Gaydio (talk) 01:51, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
Hi - I am looking for assistance in moving this draft to mainspace, please can you help? It's a short article. Many thanks
PhilippaLowe (talk) 02:00, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
Kyra6 (talk) 02:23, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
Hello, This is my first attempt at an article, please be kind. Narracan3824 (talk) 05:37, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
Narracan3824 (talk) 05:37, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
Feedback! (high note)
Feedback... (low note)
... ... I'm dreamin' of some feedback. Seriously, I know many folks have more festive activities on their agenda.
Remove - New Article Name is "InView Unmanned Aircraft System" - at the top. Write normally "InView Unmanned Aircraft System is..." Other than that article seems informative.
Thanks: will do.
JoeB52 (talk) 11:19, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
I have updated this article... Please review it and give me your thoughts on this
Regards, Merissa
Meri0098 (talk) 11:40, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
Aperisic (talk) 11:45, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
Internet Movie Database page for HERE
Partslaborfilms (talk) 15:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
Internet Movie Database page for HERE
Partslaborfilms (talk) 15:18, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
Hi. I would love some feedback on this page and some help getting it up and running. Thank you!
Partslaborfilms (talk) 15:20, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
jado wahan is a little village
Abdul Salam khuhro 15:55, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
User:Lwaltner/Braided River (Publishing)[edit]
This article is about Braided River, a nonprofit publishing company in Seattle, Wash. It may need to be checked to make sure that it is impartial and doesn't read like and advertisement. Thanks!
Lwaltner (talk) 20:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
User:Joerahme/Joseph Rahme[edit]
Someone please review my new article. Thanks:)
Joerahme (talk) 21:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
Afroditha-Chrons-Uranos[edit]
It is no thruth that Chronos castrate Uranos and story about Afroditha is no right. You must also know the diference between sky and heaven and so on...SPAM!Pleas read Homer again and employ in future deep educated people for serios things. WE have enough desinformation on Internet!
213.103.160.237 (talk) 21:19, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
Someone please review this new article. Thanks:)
Joerahme (talk) 21:27, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Megarvt/Helen_Woodward_Animal_Center&diff=prev&oldid=404906161[edit]
Hello! We have reviewed this article and are seeking advice on making it better, if needed. We have a lot of notable links and resources. Thank you very much for your help!