Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2010 July 11
This is an adaptation of the German page with the same title. I am asking for review so that the "unreviewed" template can be removed. Thanks a lot!
~~Madonnalaura (talk) 10:33, 11 July 2010 (UTC)
Hello there, and thanks for submitting your article. :) I like your writing style; also the list of recordings adds good information to the article. Every article on Wikipedia could be improved, and yours is no exception. :) Primarily, your article lacks references. All articles on Wikipedia must have verifiable, independent references cited as a source of the material. I recommend you see wp:Referencing for beginners and wp:Reliable references. The first article will show you how to properly add references to the article in the right format; the second helps define what constitutes a reliable reference. Good work on the first effort of the article; I'm sure it will get only better. :) Take care, Pianotech 12:04, 11 July 2010 (UTC)
Article link: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Asitita/Afrijitsu_Combative_System ; Article describes and gives information about the Afrijitsu Martial Arts Combative system I have created[edit]
~~Allynlancom (talk) 19:32, 11 July 2010 (UTC)
This is my first wiki article and I am wondering if this article will "stick" or if it is destined to become deleted when posted. I added as many pertinent links (wiki and external) and kept the article as encyclopedia-like as possible by using only facts. I do not work for the company but have a family member who was greatly helped by one of their products.
Hi there! The article is informative and seems to meet notability standards after following some of the references cited. I think I would carefully glean it for wording to make sure the article is written from a neutral point of view. Words like "innovative" and "successful" tend to raise an eyebrow, especially when written by someone who might have a close connection to the article's subject (as your username suggests). So, my suggestion would be make sure it's written in an encyclopedic tone and has no promotional qualities to it. Good luck :) Pianotech 23:41, 11 July 2010 (UTC)
This is a List of movies filmed in Adelaide. It is inevitably incomplete, but a reasonable start.
~~Kwah-LeBaire (talk) 02:27, 12 July 2010 (UTC)