Draft:Boston Budo

Submission declined on 28 April 2024 by Sungodtemple (talk).

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Declined by Sungodtemple 36 days ago. Last edited by Diannaa 36 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: References #1 and #3 are basically interviews, so they aren't independent. #2 is its website, so also non-independent. #4 is WP:CITEBOMB#Citations that verify random facts. Sungodtemple (talk • contribs) 22:12, 28 April 2024 (UTC)

Boston Budo is a Family Karate School in Boston, MA, that has been in operation since 1979.^[1] The curriculum encompasses a wide range of concepts from: awareness through movement, relaxation breathing, forms and self defense, to nonviolent conflict resolution and community building.^[2] The school focuses on teaching the principles of Uechi Ryu Karate to Bostonians of all ages.^[3]

History[edit]

Boston Budo was founded as Sanchin Martial Arts by Sensei Duane Lucia, and since 2010 has been helmed by his son, Sensei Noah Lucia.

References[edit]

^ "Neighborhood Karate School Going Strong Since 1979 – Beacon Hill Times". beaconhilltimes.com. Retrieved 2024-04-28.
^ "About". Boston Budo. Retrieved 2024-04-28.
^ "Residents of Amy Lowell Apartments Learn To Stay 'Savvy & Safe' – Beacon Hill Times". beaconhilltimes.com. Retrieved 2024-04-28.

[1] "Neighborhood Karate School Going Strong Since 1979 – Beacon Hill Times". beaconhilltimes.com. Retrieved 2024-04-28.

[2] "About". Boston Budo. Retrieved 2024-04-28.

[3] "Residents of Amy Lowell Apartments Learn To Stay 'Savvy & Safe' – Beacon Hill Times". beaconhilltimes.com. Retrieved 2024-04-28.

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