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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:2009 Price Chopper 400/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 04:23, 28 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • in Kansas City, Kansas, at Kansas Speedway --> at Kansas Speedway
  • before a crowd of 100,000 attendees --> before a crowd of 100,000 spectators
  • from the fifth position --> starting fron the fifth position
  • The track is one of ten intermediate to hold NASCAR races - This line seems redundant and needs to be removed .
  • because he finished seventh - Who finished seventh ? and where did the other finish ?

Background

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  • ; the others are --> with the others being .
  • opposite of the front --> opposite to the front
  • The Manufactuers' Championship could have been sealed in Kansas in the event the highest-placed Chevrolet driver finished ahead of the highest-placed Toyota competitor --> The Manufactuers' Championship could have been sealed in Kansas if the highest-placed Chevrolet driver finished ahead of the highest-placed Toyota competitor

Practice and qualifying

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  • No issues

Race

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  • By lap 23, Earnhardt had a 1.9 second lead over Keselowski. - When did Keselowski pass Martin ?
  • On the 37th lap, Johnson passed McMurray for third, as Stewart and Martin passed McMurray for fourth and fifth three laps later - Needs to be reworded
  • Three laps later, Gordon passed Kahne to take fourth, and Marcos Ambrose lost the tenth position to Kahne . Needs to be fixed.
  • Biffle made a fast restart to get ahead of Biffle and Johnson and move into second . Needs to be fixed

Images

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  • All the images seem to be okay .

Post-race

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  • No issues

Comments

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