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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 22:29, 8 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Grabbing this one for a review shortly. Miyagawa (talk) 22:29, 8 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I just realised that I hadn't actually managed to get around to doing the review! So here goes:

Lead: It could use a standard line explaining what the show is about (to be inserted just prior to the plot summary).

Plot: It's been a while since I've seen season four, but didn't the insertion of the disc occur in a specific episode - was it this one, or one prior? If it was a previous episode, then it might be worthwhile inserting a reference to it (as you have with "The Arrival").

Ratings: There's a cite needed tag in there.

It is quite close to being a Good Article overall. Personally I always liked the later episodes of Fringe which revisited things introduced in the first season. Miyagawa (talk) 20:58, 11 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for reviewing. I believe I have addressed your concerns (I unfortunately couldn't find a reliable source listing all of the season's ratings, so I removed the tidbit on the episode being one of the season's lowest rated). Let me know if there is anything else! Ruby 2010/2013 04:24, 14 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
That should be fine, I think this now meets the GA criteria. Miyagawa (talk) 15:48, 14 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Congrats! --Another Believer (Talk) 16:13, 14 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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