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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 15:57, 27 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]


  • Costumes along with choreography had to find a way to make a single, coherent show. → This sounds awkward
  • Gaga repeatedly placed within the top-ten of the Billboard Boxscore lists for the tour grosses. → Is this as it happened throughout the year?
  • Billboard also listed it as the ninth best concert tour of the year with 76 reported shows. The tour also receive → Also... also
  • Later she took → Comma after Later
  • were seven dresses → Dresses or outfits?
  • completely sold out → You don't need to write completely, because sold out already indicates that no tickets were left
  • In June 2014 Billboard → Comma after 2014
Outcome

On hold for 7 days.  — Calvin999 16:56, 27 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Congrats! ---Another Believer (Talk) 21:46, 27 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]