Talk:BGW Systems/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 02:08, 8 January 2010 (UTC) After reading this article, I can tell that it doesn't meet GAN guidelines for the following reasons:

• WP:LEAD should be expanded.
• Citations need all available information (dates, publishers), including accessdates for websites.
• Most importantly, the article is currently just a string of one sentence paragraphs with next to no structure. Some of those "paragraphs" could use citations too.

As a result, I'm failing this article. It can be renominated when it's fixed up. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 02:08, 8 January 2010 (UTC)