Talk:Battle of Sembabule/GA1
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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 10:28, 26 September 2019 (UTC)
- Why is Uganda linked while Tanzania isn't in the lead?
- Both now linked
- Tanzania had repulsed a Ugandan invasion in late 1978 Link the invasion.
- Done.
- coup that overthrew the President of Uganda, Milton Obote Link President of Uganda.
- Done.
- Remove the second "however", two "however"'s are maybe a little bit too much in a short article like this one.
- Done.
- Is there a link for both "Tiger Regiment"s in the lead and body?
- No, and there's very little information about this unit.
- Same as above for 205th Brigade.
- Same as above.
- whereby the the 205th Brigade would maneuver as an entire American maneuver.
- Anglicanised.
- The brigade met Ugandan resistance at Sembabule, marking the beginning of a three week-long battle Little bit wordy here. So the brigade met the exiles but the exiles didn't fight in the battle? Also "three week-long" needs a hyphen.
- Revised.
- The the 205th Brigade encountered double "the".
- Fixed.
- whereby the the 205th Brigade would maneuver Again double "the".
- Fixed.
- Regiment at Sembabule, beginning a three week-long battle Again "three week-long".
- Fixed.
Infobox
- Maybe add "early" before March?
- Well it could have been early or mid March, I'm not really sure.
- Maybe change the tilde into "c." in the infobox?
- Done.
- "5 April 1979" --> "5/6 April 1979" Because we do not know which source is correct.
- Done.
Images
- There are none.
Sources
- Lubega's source hasn't an access-date?
- Added.
- "War in Uganda: The Legacy of Idi Amin" Doesn't need a Google Books URL.
- Removed.
- Shouldn't Thomas' source have an access-date?
- Added.
That's anything from me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 10:28, 26 September 2019 (UTC)
- @CPA-5: I've responded to your comments. -Indy beetle (talk) 23:10, 26 September 2019 (UTC)