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This article has four main sections but they are not balanced. The lead section doesn't mention his television show which is a main section in his career/filmography and does not include any mention of awards (a main section). Future revisions could elaborate on Personal Life, filmography, and Awards and Honors. There could also be a section on each episode of his MTV show. Sources are mostly from popular journalism and celebrity websites. If there are any peer-reviewed journals or reliable sources they should be added. The article appears fairly neutral. In the awards area, there could be more elaboration on why Rock received the awards as reported by the sources. DrPerillo (talk) 18:29, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I already expanded the lead and balanced the article to the best extent as I can. If anyone is willing to further improve the page, it will be greatly appreciated. GabbyMix01 (talk) 11:56, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Drag Race Philippines guest judge

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---Another Believer (Talk) 02:58, 28 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]