Talk:Byways Cafe/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 14:45, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Will review this article, and Pied Cow Coffeehouse later. Then I'll review the remaining 2 Agriculture GANs. Gerald WL 14:45, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:26, 29 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

(Finally, an American resto without eggs benedict! Ate that once in Singapore, it gave me brainfreeze). Gerald WL 14:58, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"such as corned beef hash, omelets, and pancakes." Link omelets? Gerald WL 14:58, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:24, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"the city's "best brunch spot"..." Link brunch? Gerald WL 14:58, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:24, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"after owners were unable to reach a lease agreement with the landlord." Link landlord, so that readers don't assume it's a land lord? Gerald WL 14:58, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:25, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Description[edit]

"Moon Portland says, "locals..." Maybe add a "that" between "says" and "locals," and remove the following comma? It's not like the description of locals coming in is an opinion. Gerald WL 14:58, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:25, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Link omelets? Gerald WL 15:06, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:26, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Link blue corn meal in "blue corn pancakes" and blue corn in the following "blue corn"? Gerald WL 14:58, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:27, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Link pecan pie in "pecan"? Gerald WL 14:58, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I linked "Pecan" since pie's not being discussed here. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:28, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Link French toast, Monte Cristo sandwich, biscuits and gravy, scrambled eggs, and license plates of the United States in "license plates"? Gerald WL 14:58, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:29, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

History[edit]

Link kitsch in "kitschy," salt and pepper shakers, chrome plating in "chrome," and scone in "scones"? Gerald WL 15:06, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:31, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Closure[edit]

Link landlord in "the building's owners"? Gerald WL 15:06, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:31, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Link young adults? Gerald WL 15:06, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Gerald Waldo Luis, I think this one's overkill. People know what a young adult means. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:32, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Update: I'm genuinely tearing reading the farewell. Reminds me of a lotta IRL stuff. Gimme a moment. Gerald WL 15:06, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Reception[edit]

I'm back!

Link amaretto? Gerald WL 15:17, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:32, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Link caffeine in caffeinated? Gerald WL 15:17, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:32, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Link brunch? Gerald WL 15:17, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:33, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Link bell peppers? Gerald WL 15:17, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:33, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"If you have a pit stop, pull up at the counter and order the hash." You mean hash the weed? Gerald WL 15:17, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Hash (food) is already linked within the article. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:34, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Link tchotchke and Americana? Gerald WL 15:17, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:34, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
""restaurant entrepreneurs would err..." Link to whatever "err" means, if none, a Wiktionary entry? Gerald WL 15:17, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
This is a word I think most people know or they can look up. I don't think linking is appropriate or necessary. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:35, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Images[edit]

The portrait photo of the interior is similar to the landscape, so I didn't find it to be useful. I found this CC pic on Flickr, as well as this food photo. What d'ya think? Gerald WL 16:43, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Gerald Waldo Luis, If you know how to get these on Commons, I'm willing to add to article. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:58, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Fuck! They're noncommercial. It's not allowed. I'll see if there's more. We should have more free stuff. Gerald WL 17:25, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
The logo is under fair use, but I'm not sure if it needs to be. It's simple geometry and text, and qualifies public domain. Gerald WL 16:53, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Gerald Waldo Luis, I'll let other editors decide if the image can be transferred to Wikimedia Commons or not, but hopefully GA nom is not impacted either way. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:59, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Another Believer, good news is, they don't. IMO, tho, Commons will house it nicely. Gerald WL 17:27, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Overall[edit]

Fail or pass? Passed. Gerald WL 15:31, 29 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Gerald Waldo Luis, Thank you! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:26, 29 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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