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Good articleClaude Vivier has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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January 29, 2023Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Claude Vivier was inspired to compose Shiraz after hearing two blind singers in a market?

Needs work to correct misconceptions

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This article perpetuates from myths/misconceptions that have been debunked in Bob Gilmore's recent biography (Claude Vivier: A Composer’s Life). Vivier did not spend "some years" travelling in Japan, Bali, and Iran. Rather, he took only a single trip there, which he ended after only 5 months when he got homesick. Also, his murder was not a male prostitute but a truquer, a criminal who goes to gay bars and pretends to accept the advance of homosexuals in order to rob them. 194.136.68.66 (talk) 13:30, 21 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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GA Review

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Reviewer: AirshipJungleman29 (talk · contribs) 19:16, 29 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Honestly, this is a superb article. I'm passing it immediately. No clue why it has languished for so long. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 19:16, 29 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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    Congratulations! As above, a fantastic article. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 19:18, 29 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Cielquiparle (talk15:30, 18 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Improved to Good Article status by Charlieridgley (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 22:22, 4 February 2023 (UTC). Note: As of October 2022, all changes made to promoted hooks will be logged by a bot. The log for this nomination can be found at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Claude Vivier, so please watch a successfully closed nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Looks good! Can't read French but the source seems fine. Elli (talk | contribs) 14:01, 9 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Onegreatjoke and Elli: I'm not sure which part of the online copy of the source corresponds to pages 28–29, but the only relevant text I could find was l’un des premiers compositeurs ouvertement et fièrement homosexuels du Québec – "one of the first openly gay composers in Québec". Sojourner in the earth (talk) 12:34, 10 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Pinging GA editor @Charlieridgley: to make sure they are aware about the issue with the hook and claim that "one of the first in history" may be too broad. Cielquiparle (talk) 11:58, 1 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
This is an excellent article, and I hate seeing it held up over this issue. Charlieridgley, who got the article up to GA, has been inactive for a couple of months. In their absence, I've been a bit bold and removed the "one of the first openly gay composers" line from the article. I think there are many alt hooks that could do this article justice. How about:
  • ALT1: ... that Claude Vivier was inspired to compose Shiraz after hearing two blind singers in a market?
Firefangledfeathers (talk / contribs) 04:14, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Pinging Elli any thoughts on this edit and alt? Firefangledfeathers (talk / contribs) 03:17, 18 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
ALT1 is cited in the article and the sources check out (Gilmore 2014 says Shiraz was inspired by real-life blind singers in a market, and Hickling 2008 confirms that there were two of them). I haven't done a full re-review of the article, just approving the hook. Sojourner in the earth (talk) 07:16, 18 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks SITE! I really messed up the pings above, so another try for @Onegreatjoke, Elli, and Cielquiparle: I think things are good to go here, but speak up if the new hook and article changes don't work for you. Firefangledfeathers (talk / contribs) 15:06, 18 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]


To add to article

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To add to this article: explanation of what a truquer is. There doesn't seem to be a definition for the noun sense of this term at Wiktionary. 173.88.246.138 (talk) 03:12, 3 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]